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Karim-Rap-4-Life ==>The Don Until I'm gone

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افتراضي Karim-Rap-4-Life ==>The Don Until I'm gone

Title:
Karim-Rap-4-Life
The Don Until I'm gone
By:
Karim-Rap-4-Life
26.03.2012
15.45
don't you amaze these days
they see us with a narrow gaze
what they have done to raise
the money chasers got the keys
gained profits folks votes they seize
wish you get away with no please
you're playing your big mouth saying
comming late want us to pay attention
you've been summing for money dunning
In the time of ruining you were running
you're not gaining as we're not escaping
we stand our position your plan we're facing
we displace the double face from our place
nothing to lace except you we want to replace
don't try to make the space it's a hard case
True SoLDier don't fade they live for EvEr
whatever you say is a cover
don't mind we discover
your principal was flee to live wherever
real men were dying to live here for EvEr
they never say never
remember 5 October the massacre

God is is my Shepherd i'm not gonna die
I'm not afraid if I'm gonna die
My heart is beating fast
To be or not to be that's not a quest
I'm coming from the west
put it to the test
I express what I've in my chest
HONOR is the best of my best
I don't care for the rest

grab your nine before I sign
put it on put it on
I close my eyes PAAA!!!
I'm still alive why?
Invisible you can't see me
so Heavy that your men can't carry me
Street is my old school
how you think I can be cool
the hood I grew in not any good
where the authority have the preority
no other no food for the minority
since I was little no damn thing changed
there is money but where are food made?
I grew up where many thugs on the streets
freeze on your knees give what you've please
ok!! don't kill me I....PAA PAA!!!! dead in calm
oh damn he's dead among the traffic jam
woop woop that's the sound of the police
they will be condemned them for many years
laws are laws but who's done is always the don
loyalty is gone just hit the coin
wait I see the same thugs running again
they claim in prison will maintain
common man don't be fool they call it corruption
seduction temptation and no body give attention
no caption let them thangs go no revelation

God is is my Shepherd i'm not gonna die
I'm not afraid if I'm gonna die
My heart is beating fast
To be or not to be that's not a quest
I'm coming from the west
put it to the test
I express what I've in my chest
HONOR is the best of my best
I don't care for the rest

let's talk about fashion why are they messing
staffs of Jews are spreading
Illuminati are planning
arabes no scanning sleeping
for America are obeying
open your Tv again
ask your children what they are watching
Space Toon space Toon
oh damn a big tool to fool
MBC 4 all daughters are screaming before
what the hell you're waiting for
Melody and Rotana oh Films of drama
ya punks where you gonna
palastean is yelling no body listening
Jews are killing and you keep looking
you don't want your selves involved in
hey you Rich Dubai of the east Bay
I see huge building who pay
Ah okey the same business every day
big round tables too much money
Haven't you see
in Sumal there's nothing funny
Christians rushed to solidarity
where is your plans for charity
Islam is the source of humanity
you have a strong economy
I hate you all arabes are gone
damn to you all representatives
don't claim to be muslims
Real Muslims not like this
one day at time
little children of our little children will read the history of their countries
they will realize that you were nothing
escapers cowards looking forwards peace
because you were cowards
It's not tasty to see you on Tv
hear you talking
see you walking
standing babbling
you're nothing
you deserve canning
in boxes you foxes
where my cannons at
Hit that demons
in their conferences
Like Ben badiss
with my pen here is
reveal their deeds

God is is my Shepherd i'm not gonna die
I'm not afraid if I'm gonna die
My heart is beating fast
To be or not to be that's not a quest
I'm coming from the west
put it to the test
I express what I've in my chest
HONOR is the best of my best
I don't care for the rest

BOW DOWN when you see my RHYME
BOW DOWN I cause your pain
BOW DOWN it's BIG BANG
Kamikaze
Yo Wassup
Karim-Rap-4-Life
Anti-Conformist no Splits
Patriot no riot
The Don Until I'm gone











 


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قديم 2012-03-26, 19:06   رقم المشاركة : 2
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you wrote it this fast?,
man you are a machine
good bless you and protect you
i'll read and reply soon










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قديم 2012-03-26, 19:34   رقم المشاركة : 3
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wooooooooooow
i don't know what i can say
because no matter of wht i say it's still no enough
just like truth has a tongue and speaking in ryhmes
i'm really amazed
you deserve to be some thing big
because you have no fear of any body
in a time full of materialism
like they say you are what you have
we may have no money but we have hono and pride
it's priceless
HONOR is the best of my best
I don't care for the rest
soooo true
i'm really touched when you spoke about palestine
illuminati and jews
the americanism wich are poisons that eats our community alive

YOU ARE THE TRUTH'S TONGUE

if you paticipate in elections some day tell me
i'll give you my voice
carry on like this
and don't change
we need tallented honored people like you










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قديم 2012-03-26, 20:34   رقم المشاركة : 4
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i tottaly forgot to ask you do you draw Graffiti










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قديم 2012-03-26, 21:49   رقم المشاركة : 5
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*Waaaaaaaaaaaaw that is amazing I can not belive that we have a talent lik that in Algeria .....pfffff....waw what can I say .... god bless you .... *
The way you choose the topic
The way you choose the words .........waaaaaaaaw..........
You shouldn‘t stop here you have to go farther than that ......
*Ihope we will see mor soon*
Love it










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قديم 2012-03-27, 14:05   رقم المشاركة : 6
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Well
It’s nice ,long,poem but really I enjoyed reading and analysing it
As they say from every garden you pick up a flower
But here I think there”s no garden no flower and instead of …………ok doesn’t mater….I think u get it
Yeah unfortunately,this is what happen
For me ofcaurse,the problem is when we believe in such”people”,in their sayings,in their promises,in their words but not in their actions…..yeah and the big problem, we who chose them
We do and finally when one of us claims,you know where he will go”where we can’t hear his voice again”!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So we have to accept the result coz they’re chosen by whom!!!!!!....... by us
We see one of us ‘s arrested and we keep sielent”fishing eyes”NoONE dares and ask what’s happen there…………………why because it becomes our habit!!!
Then inorder to forget what we’ve seen and what we heard outside ,Tv is the key,we all became”politicians”,”actors”,and there we can share our ideas”in the dark” ,where you can hear only
“chchchch….don’t speak up………..ok ok it’s enough………”
However, and fortunately brother Karim this kind of problem is found all over the world……coz simply there is no’DEMOCRACY”
Any way ,Thank you brother for sharing us such very/very interesting Topic eventhough it was in the form of poem”Rap”but it contains a real life problem….it reflects the society’s sufferings
No way
Brother we’re vaccinated to obey
We’re vaccinated to keep our mouths to be silent
It becomes our habit……..
We who selected this way,we were the electors… so we who have to bear the results
Thank you again brother Karim
May Allah blesses be upon you always
THE SUN WILL SHINE ONE DAY











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قديم 2012-03-27, 18:43   رقم المشاركة : 7
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
you wrote it this fast?,
man you are a machine
good bless you and protect you
i'll read and reply soon

I must confess It took me Three hours to finish and It was difficult to write it It's been a long time I've not written a poem or lyrics so hard and I will not write again at least for a month or two I've no time









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قديم 2012-03-27, 18:50   رقم المشاركة : 8
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
wooooooooooow
i don't know what i can say
because no matter of wht i say it's still no enough
just like truth has a tongue and speaking in ryhmes
i'm really amazed
you deserve to be some thing big
because you have no fear of any body
in a time full of materialism
like they say you are what you have
we may have no money but we have hono and pride
it's priceless
HONOR is the best of my best
I don't care for the rest
soooo true
i'm really touched when you spoke about palestine
illuminati and jews
the americanism wich are poisons that eats our community alive

YOU ARE THE TRUTH'S TONGUE

if you paticipate in elections some day tell me
i'll give you my voice
carry on like this
and don't change
we need tallented honored people like you

Yeah thank you so much for passing and encourging me and I would inform you that if I know that the result of election would be on my side I'll not accept it hhhhhhhhh you know why cuz Responsability is something not easdy and those persons who are running fastly to it ....it's not easy you know why cuz the rights of people are in your hands so only good and strong people who fear GOD deserve that authority

and thank you for passingagain and my words are just what come to my mind and I can 't read even a line without your presence here all the members right here cuz it's an encouragement tahts' what makes me write more and more and thank you again and again for your nice words SIS









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قديم 2012-03-27, 18:52   رقم المشاركة : 9
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
i tottaly forgot to ask you do you draw Graffiti
Yes I do .....but not too much I'm beginner
.......why? are you interested in it?









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قديم 2012-03-27, 18:56   رقم المشاركة : 10
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة japoniya romi مشاهدة المشاركة
*Waaaaaaaaaaaaw that is amazing I can not belive that we have a talent lik that in Algeria .....pfffff....waw what can I say .... god bless you .... *
The way you choose the topic
The way you choose the words .........waaaaaaaaw..........
You shouldn‘t stop here you have to go farther than that ......
*Ihope we will see mor soon*
Love it
hhhhh thank you for encouraging yeah you're apprecaited but I'm not as much as you think I'm just a beginner in this domain it's higher than we expect.......thank you for passing









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قديم 2012-03-28, 01:03   رقم المشاركة : 11
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So Niiiice So Greatt
Reaaly So Nice

God Bles You
nd we ll be waiting for anothers too
Please dont stop

...

^^










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قديم 2012-03-28, 11:24   رقم المشاركة : 12
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[QUOTE=Hillin;9372682]

Well
It’s nice ,long,poem but really I enjoyed reading and analysing it
As they say from every garden you pick up a flower
But here I think there”s no garden no flower and instead of …………ok doesn’t mater….I think u get it
Yeah unfortunately,this is what happen
For me ofcaurse,the problem is when we believe in such”people”,in their sayings,in their promises,in their words but not in their actions…..yeah and the big problem, we who chose them

yeah that's the problem but the problem is not on voters i mean people they are just a simple ones looking for better days how they could know real ones from fakes ones Only God can save us


We do and finally when one of us claims,you know where he will go”where we can’t hear his voice again

yeah for real !!!!

”!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So we have to accept the result coz they’re chosen by whom!!!!!!....... by us
We see one of us ‘s arrested and we keep sielent”fishing eyes”NoONE dares and ask what’s happen there…………………why because it becomes our habit

Bad habit
until what
?

Then inorder to forget what we’ve seen and what we heard outside ,Tv is the key,we all became”politicians”,”actors”,and there we can share our ideas”in the dark” ,where you can hear only
“chchchch….don’t speak up………..ok ok it’s enough

the thing that make the truth speechless toothless blood floods on the floor closed door of happiness


However, and fortunately brother Karim this kind of problem is found all over the world……coz simply there is no’DEMOCRACY

Yeah I can see

Liberty is blind it needs to wear glasses

Any way ,Thank you brother for sharing us such very/very interesting Topic eventhough it was in the form of poem”Rap”but it contains a real life problem….it reflects the society’s sufferings

THAT'S WHAT REAL RAP DO

No way
Brother we’re vaccinated to obey
We’re vaccinated to keep our mouths to be silent
It becomes our habit……..
We who selected this way,we were the electors… so we who have to bear the results
Thank you again brother Karim
May Allah blesses be upon you always
THE SUN WILL SHINE ONE DAY



Now we just wait for the judgement day

thank you so much for your special reply it means so much to me









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قديم 2012-03-28, 11:30   رقم المشاركة : 13
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة פـگآيـۃ قَـَلِبْ} مشاهدة المشاركة
So Niiiice So Greatt
Reaaly So Nice

God Bles You
nd we ll be waiting for anothers too
Please dont stop

...

^^
Thank you so much you're appreciated I'll write ofcourse









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قديم 2012-03-28, 11:37   رقم المشاركة : 14
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life مشاهدة المشاركة
Yes I do .....but not too much I'm beginner
.......why? are you interested in it?
Yes i'm a fan of Grafitti art
But i draw manga
i really like yr drawing
exellent work for a begginer
you are multi tallented
may allah protect you from envy and jealousy









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قديم 2012-03-28, 12:02   رقم المشاركة : 15
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Yes i'm a fan of Grafitti art
But i draw manga
i really like yr drawing
exellent work for a begginer
you are multi tallented
may allah protect you from envy and jealousy
yeah thank you but I don't think it's a kind of Graffitti not it??? I think graffiti is drawing words in a very nice way doesn't it!!!!!!!!!!!









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