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2011-11-25, 21:32 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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to my BLEEDING heart
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. . why i believed my innocence to feel great what ever happend now i'm making my tears and feel so much pain.. where are you my friend it was the last time we met and set.. talking ..laughing...and dreaming since so long time i've so much things to tell so much feeling to share you stood there in front of me just ..close enough to loose you please my heart i just want no more pain no more night set no more stupid get no more tears no more gilty felt please draw my way so i can forget leave me thinking to breathe again and no more "it was.." will play in my mind.. i'll walk away and make time doing his job try to make me finally . . . Forget please tell me guys.... how did you find it ? ^_^
آخر تعديل hairless17 2011-12-03 في 10:21.
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2011-11-26, 15:40 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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12 Vu |
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2011-11-27, 14:28 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | |||
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so great Girl that's good and I liked your rhyming and well chosen words depicting your situation.... |
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2011-11-27, 14:29 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | |||
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keep doing like that and develop what you want....the key is reading free styles of poetry...so you can grab something new...okey i will bring you a poetry aboiut friendship it is of mine ...peace up!!! |
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2011-11-27, 22:47 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | |||
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Thank you brother for this comment it's so nice from you to say that... |
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2011-11-28, 13:24 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | |||
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yeah....if you want to see my writing visit my topics i've many poems it's better to read them they are so good i garantee you will like them |
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2011-11-28, 14:19 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | |||
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yeah i've done |
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2011-11-29, 18:21 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | |||
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Friends of mine all are gone they left me alone so the pain is done yes i'm living lonely on my own hey i gave you my heart' crown my heart to you was always open who can stand next to me and listen deceivig in these world always happen It was the thing that make me frighten with you friend I used to be fine I give you one more chance to combine I'm waiting for you, forgiveness is my sign hey this is for you Girl I wrote it yessterday tell me if you like it okey |
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2011-11-29, 19:57 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | ||||
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اقتباس:
I Adore It Realy Realy Like it... No... Love it it's so so so sweet from You thank you it's lovely thx ^.^ |
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2011-11-29, 23:11 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |||
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and i also wrote this for you |
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2011-11-29, 23:16 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | |||
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I just wanted to inform you about the title |
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2011-11-30, 00:26 | رقم المشاركة : 12 | ||||
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اقتباس:
i 'll try to fix it ^^ |
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2011-11-30, 22:48 | رقم المشاركة : 13 | |||
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Thanks |
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2011-12-01, 18:19 | رقم المشاركة : 14 | |||
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it's just great brother I wish you all the best |
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2011-12-01, 20:20 | رقم المشاركة : 15 | ||||
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اقتباس:
2nd i didn't know if you talkin' to me or.... But i want to notice u that i'm girl and thank you aGain ^^' |
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