my poem "our world"

[salwastar]

hi guys


i bring to you my poem


i want you to say if it is better or not


here we are



we are in this world like flowers

we are in this world like brothers

speak and mention together

the world can be better

our world is like a star

when you see it you can't imagine how far

between you and it

is too hard

so if you like your world

don't wish to be a lord

otherways you will rule

it with the wrong




i look forward to show a positif replies


see you

[زيد المال عبد المجيد]

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[salwastar]

thanks my brother

[spy4me]

hi, yeah that's good for you
expressive and wise words
good work sis

[GINNA]

It s perfect
keep on this way

[Slim-Shady]

I like it........keep up the good work

[salwastar]

yay

good replies from nice peoples

thank you so much

you 've supported me and risen my confidence

[anes15]

nice poem ...............

[salwastar]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة anes15

nice poem ...............

thanks

[Lakamora_dz]

so good ...

[english lover]

very good sis continue on this manor

[salwastar]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة english lover

very good sis continue on this manor

thanks

may god help you

[radpeace]

it's really a good poem from a foreigner learner of english, keep up writing poems sis you're good

[soumia-rs]

thanks sis you are very coOoOol^^

[salwastar]

thanks sis you are very coOoOol^^

thank you a lot