Is this the life?!

Asolvip · 2013-06-20, 14:04

All the people change
I'm at the back of the range
But I can see everybody
Who do you think you are?
Are you trying to be somebody?
In a garden we grew up like trees
And now I just wish the time would freeze
So I can go back in time and see the real you
You are somebody new; you went out of our crew
But have you read those lines I drew?
They are for you ...*
You are so nice ; you don't have to be as cold as ice
I can see your heart, it's White and it's ready to fight
To break down those Walls,and see the bright light
That could take you away , where you'll feel comfortable to stay*

yousrayousra77 · 2013-06-20, 14:48

Waw this is so nice

Asolvip · 2013-06-20, 15:45

Thank you so much .. I'm trying to do my best

Katy Pretty girl · 2013-06-20, 15:46

i'm always with u
sis
u'r the best
keep it up
i luv about u'r poems that r so short and they have a rythme
and anyone can anderstand u'r words and the story u'r talking about it

Asolvip · 2013-06-20, 15:55

Thank you so much .. I'm trying to do my best ... Just keep on reading my work

Katy Pretty girl · 2013-06-20, 16:19

i will
u'r my friend
i have to

Asolvip · 2013-06-20, 16:25

And you are my friend too .. I'll be the first Nchallah who check your work

Karim-Rap-4-Life · 2013-06-20, 18:28

yow another one another one yow peers you gotta flee clear the way asolvip on her way aaahahahaha ayo wassup yow i like this one too keep it up

Asolvip · 2013-06-20, 18:38

Hey yow , you can call me Abeer
I'm so strong from people I won't fear
I like to be myself and I say it clear
I love to be drunk but not by drinking beer
But by the worst feeling of pain that I like to bear
So , I'll say to the people the words they want to hear
I want to be far away from them but from my friends I want to be near
expressing my feeling is free and not sale
Because I want to succeed and not fail
Hey yow thanks a lot bro ... Keep in touch

Karim-Rap-4-Life · 2013-06-20, 18:48

Ow so hard this one you can add it to one of your writings they're useful but not this one coz it's kinda diffrent in theme this latter is a fight and showing self confidence

Asolvip · 2013-06-20, 18:57

Yup my bro .. Now i feel selfconfident because Of your support guys , well those pieces I'm writing them for fun because I'm just using my phone but the real poems I write them in calm place in the front of my pc sometimes in the darkness ... And ESP when I feel sad ..

Karim-Rap-4-Life · 2013-06-20, 19:02

Yeah I think it's a similarity that the most of writers got but me not anymore I just anywhere these last days

Asolvip · 2013-06-20, 20:35

Owh good... Very good o(^▽^)o I used to write in the bus when I'm going back home and u know the long way from Msila to borj Bouarrirudj .. I wrote in my room in the residence ( no TVhhh)
Well, I want to write some happy poems which show self-confidence and the strong power of the person ... I'll write sth cool Nchallah in the coming days