The killing perplixity

[Asolvip]

I've been wondering many days and days
I told you goodbye but my heart still sticking in your haze
I tried to remove you from my life
But in my head I've always wanted to be your wife
I said I'll refuse you, but I don't think I'll get even a chance to be with you
You are so far ... but for me you are so close
I think of you in every moment passes in my life
And my mind says just erase him and don't try to dive
In stupid dreams that never come alive
Nothing is true, I'm so confused, and it's very complicated
My friends told me: you've never loved, you just like to play
But I'm here suffering, no-one can feel my pain, so don't only say
You listened to what they have said, and I'm here feeling like I'm dead
You chose your way, but I always wanted you to stay
You were good to me but sometimes bad
But unfortunately I was always bad as they said
I suffered, I cried, I hit my heart
But that couldn't change even a part
I'm so sorry if I hurt you
But you didn't hurt me; you killed a person that couldn't get over you
I wish you could forgive me and I forgive you
Then we delete those limits between me and you
Unluckily I think that my fate is not to be with you
But being with someone who's better than you

[Black_Poison]

Hi girl
welcome to the section
i hope you enjoy
well.....i'll read this very well then i'll comment
^^
Keep it up you
peace

[Asolvip]

Ok ! My talented friend , well I still got more in my pocket .. U can check this in my blog .. The link is in my signature

[نَازِكْ]

well done
carry on

[Asolvip]

Thx I'm going on and keep writing yesterday I finished a poem about Palestine !

[Black_Poison]

Really...well...i really would love to read
Bring it ...girl
hhhhh

[Asolvip]

Ok soon u'll see it , btw this poem " killing perplexity" is my true love story .. So when I read it I cry

[Asolvip]

I wrote these lines about Islam
Im Muslim and proud
I scream the name of Allah aloud
And I defend his blessed name in the middle of the crowd
So believe , he is perfect , he created *a sky and the cloud
*So , pray for Allah
And *live in his highest paradise
And read very well the quoran before you start to criticise*
Because islamic rules should be analysed in the right way*
I hope that u like it !*

[Asolvip]

I wrote these lines about Islam
Im Muslim and proud
I scream the name of Allah aloud
And I defend his blessed name in the middle of the crowd
So believe , he is perfect , he created *a sky and the cloud
*So , pray for Allah
And *live in his highest paradise
And read very well the quoran before you start to criticise*
Because islamic rules should be analysed in the right way*
I hope that u like it !*

[The Gang]

So nice but no cries for the past it's done u need to step forward

[Asolvip]

Of course, the past is good and now it is just funny memories ... I laugh when I remember it

[Black_Poison]

I really like wgat you wrote
but i'll tell you this
Don't cry over anyone....cuz nobody deserves
people just leave...cuz they were nver meant to be
just...keep your heart safe...and follow your destiny
cuz...that's so much for a heart break
just...forget...and move on...what's yours will be yours...and what's not is just fake

Just keep your head up girl....let nothing affect you


time will be enough to heal you
^^

[Black_Poison]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Asolvip

I wrote these lines about Islam
Im Muslim and proud
I scream the name of Allah aloud
And I defend his blessed name in the middle of the crowd
So believe , he is perfect , he created *a sky and the cloud
*So , pray for Allah
And *live in his highest paradise
And read very well the quoran before you start to criticise*
Because islamic rules should be analysed in the right way*
I hope that u like it !*

^^
Yep...i loved it
^^
Carry on girl
There is some sort of energy...and power in your words
^^
That's what i like about a poem...
I always measure...if it could reach me...or not
i mean the feelings you wanted to express within your line
Great joob
^^

[Asolvip]

Thx .. You are a nice person , well I'm just wondering about what you do in life?! Are u a student or something else
And if u couldn't answer my question .. It's ok
Well my poem about palestine starts like this
I go back in time to those sweet memories
I feel I can touch them , I'll write about them some stories*
Before I become sad after I did that crime
.......
Well I couldn't upload it , I'm using my phone , later on I'll publish it here , well it's about a girl who her father and mother are killed by the enemy then when the soldier tells her this bad news and he tries to kill her ... At the end she kills him using a rock say we are the original inhabitants of this earth .. And she will feel regretful because she killed a person ..

[Black_Poison]

Yep ^^ sure i'll tell you abt me in private
I like the idea.....if only you can upload it
But....it's okey .. Cuz i'm using a stupid phone too hhhh
i know how hard is it
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
just take your time
^^