What's wrong, what's right

[Hind_dz]

Peace be upon you

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Just a scrawl

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?Do you know what's right, what's wrong

?What's black, and what's white

?What's a night, what's a dawn

?When to forgive, and when to fight

?How to make your life a song

?How to be its own knight

To avoid trouble's throng

To avoid life's bite

It doesn't matter if u were alone

You can make things right

You can be tough, you can be strong

You can reach any height

You can beat bitter's tone

You can pass all the night

Choose your path, make it drawn

!Don't you even dare wait

Cuz you can survive for so long

If you only know what's wrong, what's right

[Damned-nait]

I'll be back soon lol

[Damned-nait]

so great your words I really like that poem wow
so I see a real progression and that's cool Hind ha ha ha
I can say nothing except w.o.w
that's amaziiiiiiiiing keep it up

[Hind_dz]

that's thnx 2 ur advices Karim

I keep telling myself: rhythm n rhyme, rhythm n rhyme hhhhhhhh

thank u so much 4 passing by my topic

[hind 306]

hi hny
it s a very nice poem
i really really like it
i did nt know that u write poems
so go ahead and good luck dear

[amel nina]

Wow, you didn't tell me that's you're good at writing poems my twin, guess it's one of your outnumbered hidden talents

I really like it

Waiting for the next ones

Keep it up and never give up

[Hind_dz]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة hind 306

hi hny
it s a very nice poem
i really really like it
i did nt know that u write poems
so go ahead and good luck dear

Thank u so much 4 passing by other Hind hhhhh

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amel nina

Wow, you didn't tell me that's you're good at writing poems my twin, guess it's one of your outnumbered hidden talents

I really like it

Waiting for the next ones

Keep it up and never give up

Come on! u r my twin u r supposed 2 know everything about me hhhhhhh

Thank u Nina, I really appreciate it

[M!ss_f@ti]

You can make things right

You can be tough, you can be strong

You can reach any height

You can beat bitter's tone

You can pass all the night



wooooooooow i like it so much

thx a lot dear ,, great words

[Hind_dz]

Glad u like it dear

Thank u so much 4 passing by

^^