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2012-08-09, 21:19
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blue pen by spy
Is your blue pen tired of winter ?
days I gave, days you gave, the same or What makes sense for your scattered words Or what time had taught you before I came It was just a drop of water in my sea To stand again, rise my hands and see Things ,so far, in the sky still come You care how I am or even how I’ve become A king without a kingdom, without a crown A man you deceived, a man you let down If words could tell the pain you made, you make Then let those sundry wounds invade me for pain sake What a life I may lead, what chances I can take I walked along the streets asking for peace For moments I needed and for a missing piece Nothing I have got just one single fact That no more pretending, im going to act Like a new comer, knowing nobody, and my heart like a hammer Hard hammer, no more worries, a man you made by your swagger For she can drag you to the top Or edit you like an image in photoshop But she never “saves you as”, just “cancel” for another male You think I will fail, this tale never ends with my woe My pride takes over me from the head to the last toe Am not a foe, but am a man who never falls apart For I told you everything and that was my own part My own dart, went on for nothing, my heart You once had it all, liking my status, writing in my wall No, you’ll never have it, I’ve made an oath For one way can never lead us…both ………… 14/07/2012
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2012-08-10, 18:58
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Hi spy
heheheh they 've said that I behave such critics nd I was always denying but I think they're right Coz as I c I can't drop by any cute subject without leaving my 'long 'comments, ^^ any way,let me go back straight to the fabulous and charming poem Great job friend I liked it I liked most how the pain has soon changed to challenge nd without forgetting ur chosen tittle "blue pen' really it fits the topic nd i think it succeeded in telling too much about the story I think I've to end up here since I've nothing to add except congratulation keep in touch Bwa |
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2012-08-10, 19:15
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hi dear friend |
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2012-08-10, 20:25
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اقتباس:
hhhhh hi hillin it's ok, criticising always improves one's performance you know you remind me of a my colleague, she always critices everything i do and when i ask her why she replies : i like teasing you i told you before i like reading long comments, i even think that the longer are the comment on my topic the more my topic is interesting and that really pushes me forward to give more thank you hillin for reading ^^ |
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2012-08-10, 20:31
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hhh yes "photoshop", im addicted to it recently so much so it marks his presence strongly since both photoshop or poetry are methods of art thank you princess for reading ^^ |
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2012-08-10, 23:17
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اقتباس:
is that true?...ok no really i'm reading ur topics cuz they are intresting..  so, maybe u can teach me some things about the use of photoshop... keep going ps: don't worry i'm not a stocker hhh peace |
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2012-08-11, 10:39
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Hi again
so Frank girl at least but I didn't like such frankness ^^ well,I would like to clarify just sth Spy when I say that I criticise that's not mean I like to chase fault or tease somebody but rather it's a way of interacting with the subject It's sth even me I can't understand may be a kind of evaluaton eventhu I'm not especialied nd knowledgable enough but I think it's sth innate hope to understand me Wishing u all the best |
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2012-08-12, 19:37
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 Hi spy First of all let me congratulate you brother for that poem ... next .. let me say i'm speechless .... i liked it very very much .... it's a real rare piece of art .... actually i see that this poem says alot .... i guess this is not jsut like any normal poem ... know what i mean ? ...any way i'll let you decide wether i'm right or wrong .... and actually if you allow me to put this poem into one of my next songs i'd be so thankful .... cause i realy loved it  Great job ... keep up |
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2012-08-12, 23:43
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as i always say i like your comments keep hitting me by them and never stop your style many thanks ^^ |
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2012-08-12, 23:56
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i dont know what exactlty mean by adding it to my next song but it's ok..whatever thank you fpr passing by here and we're waiting your writings ^^ |
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2012-08-14, 00:32
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woooooooooooooooooooooooooow |
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2012-08-14, 01:50
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اقتباس:
it's always nice to find out people who appreciate my writings and get inspired by a particular passage or word thanks for reading sister ^^ |
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