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[achour idoughi]

ok just exuse me for the mistakes of tape

[younes01]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة achour idoughi

who among us doesn't want to become a child another time? But do you knowwhy?! Because childhood is the only period of time in which there is noproblems or dellema,!!!!! we don't feel anxious at all.
A child is always playing and enjoying his time in this period..
Unfortunately, this is not the case for all the children around the world.
children are suffering more and more especially those of poor countries from various exploitations. Those latterr,I mean children, are engaged in unsafe conditions. They are obliged to work days and nights to meet the needs of their families
Their bosses exploit them in hard and dangerous labours..
moreover, they haven't even insurance. What a shame!!
It is time to react so that our children live a life which is full of love and security.
Many organization should be created to make end to this pure!!!!!! exploitation.
governments must forbid and ban such action by setting up rules. in addition to this, they have to eliminate poverty .
Our children are us tomorrow , hence we have to protect them because protecting them means preserving the future of generations

good writing but you must care about the orthographic faults , i wish that i made not a mistakes in correction
i give you 5.5/8

[عبد اللطيفْ]

c'est bien
! apprenez-moi l'Anglais si vous voulez bien

[silver3100]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة latyf

c'est bien
! apprenez-moi l'Anglais si vous voulez bien

mais
mais tu est fort en anglais

[عبد اللطيفْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة silver3100

mais
mais tu est fort en anglais

pas trop fort comme mes chers amis
^^

[roseikram]

شكرااااااااااااااااااااااا or thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

[silver3100]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة latyf

pas trop fort comme mes chers amis
^^

ok
et en français aussi tu n'est pas fort comme eux ^^ XD

[عبد اللطيفْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة silver3100

ok
et en français aussi tu n'est pas fort comme eux ^^ XD

tu as tout compris loOl

[silver3100]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة latyf

tu as tout compris loOl

oui moi je comprend tous
ok
LOol

[عبد اللطيفْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة silver3100

oui moi je comprend tous
ok
LOol

loOl
wellah c'est vrai, bon courage
j'espère te connaitre à la faculté de medecine

[achour idoughi]

i did it to my mother who is teacher of english and she gave me 4/5

[roseikram]

شكراااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااا

[younes01]

idoughi
you did a lot of mistakes and you wrote a words i search for it and i couldn't find it
and i think you had 3.5/5
your mamy give you 4/5 because your are her child and in order to encourage you

[achour idoughi]

i told you that the mistakes i did are ones of taping

[Nour el houda93]

think you verry much my sister

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