صفحة خاصة بالإنجليزية - الصفحة 20

♥احباب الرحمــن♥ · 2014-01-29, 17:02

ارجوا من الاستاذ المحترم ان يعطيني رايه بفقرتي وبكل صراحة

Last weekend we decided to go an a picnic. I went with my friends we started to collect the money to buy the food and the drinks; we went there by one my friends’ car. We started our journey early in the morning. The trip took half on hour. We arrived there at nine o’clock.
Suddenly the weather over turned. The sky turned dark, a storm blew and heavy rain poured. We couldn’t get out of our room. We spent most of the day placing cards, watching T.V and listening to the songs. In the evening we collected our belonging and drove back to the city.
We arrived to the city. Every one went to his house. We were so un happy because we couldn’t swim or play on the beach. I hope that weather will be fine next time. We arranged to have another picnic next month.

toulay · 2014-01-30, 18:57

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥*رتاج القران*♥

ارجوا من الاستاذ المحترم ان يعطيني رايه بفقرتي وبكل صراحة

Last weekend we decided to go an a picnic. I went with my friends we started to collect the money to buy the food and the drinks; we went there by one my friends’ car. We started our journey early in the morning. The trip took half on hour. We arrived there at nine o’clock.
Suddenly the weather over turned. The sky turned dark, a storm blew and heavy rain poured. We couldn’t get out of our room. We spent most of the day placing cards, watching T.V and listening to the songs. In the evening we collected our belonging and drove back to the city.
We arrived to the city. Every one went to his house. We were so un happy because we couldn’t swim or play on the beach. I hope that weather will be fine next time. We arranged to have another picnic next month.

Peace be upon you
I'm not a teacher,but I tried to evaluate your paragraph

Last weekend, my friends and I decided to go on a picnic. we started to collect money ,to buy food and drinks.
in the early morning, our journey began and the trip took half an hour. .
Suddenly, the weather over turned. The sky turned dark, a storm blew and it stardted raining heavily . We couldn’t get out of the room. We spent most of the day placing cards, watching T.V and listening to the songs. In the evening ,we packed our bags and went back to the city.
as we arrived , Every one of us went home. my friends and I were not happy with that picnic ,because we couldn’t swim or go to the beach. I hope that the weather will be lovely next time so as to have another picnic next month.

while reading your paragraph,I tried to correct the mistakes
I'm going to tell you how I did to evaluate your paragraph
first of all,you said we decided tell me who decided,then you mentioned you have planned to go on picnic with your friends
so you have to mention the subject first then you can replace it
the sentence became my friend and I decided.....till the period

moreover,why the money,the food,and the drinks
say directly money ,food and drinks
as well,try to respect punctuation it's very important

hope I helped you
BEST OF LUCK

♥احباب الرحمــن♥ · 2014-01-30, 19:33

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة toulay

peace be upon you
i'm not a teacher,but i tried to evaluate your paragraph

last weekend, my friends and i decided to go on a picnic. We started to collect money ,to buy food and drinks.
In the early morning, our journey began and the trip took half an hour. .
Suddenly, the weather over turned. The sky turned dark, a storm blew and it stardted raining heavily . We couldn’t get out of the room. We spent most of the day placing cards, watching t.v and listening to the songs. In the evening ,we packed our bags and went back to the city.
As we arrived , every one of us went home. My friends and i were not happy with that picnic ,because we couldn’t swim or go to the beach. I hope that the weather will be lovely next time so as to have another picnic next month.

While reading your paragraph,i tried to correct the mistakes
i'm going to tell you how i did to evaluate your paragraph
first of all,you said we decided tell me who decided,then you mentioned you have planned to go on picnic with your friends
so you have to mention the subject first then you can replace it
the sentence became my friend and i decided.....till the period

moreover,why the money,the food,and the drinks
say directly money ,food and drinks
as well,try to respect punctuation it's very important

hope i helped you
best of luck

شكرا على رايك ان شاء الله نقدر نصحح اخطائي

ath111 · 2014-01-30, 20:24

The semi-modal : used to

We use it to express a past habit

Examples

When I was a child,I used to go to the mosque with my father but now, I go alone

When my father was young,he used to smoke

She didn't use to be shy like this

Did you use to practise sport in the past?

Where did she use to go after school?

Exercise: Conjugate the verbs expressing past habits

I ( to drink ) coffee very much

He ( not to be ) selfish when he was living here

The weather ( to be ) so cold in this town?

Why she ( to hate ) him though he ( to be ) very kind?

جوهرة القلوب · 2014-02-01, 10:49

hi sir , how are you ? i hope ur fine & well

Exercise: Conjugate the verbs expressing past habits

I ( to drink ) coffee very much

I used to drink coffee very much

He ( not to be ) selfish when he was living here

He didn't use to be selfish when he was living here

The weather ( to be ) so cold in this town

The weather used to be so cold in this town

Why she ( to hate ) him though he ( to be ) very kind

Why did she use to hate him though he used to be
very kind

ath111 · 2014-02-01, 11:54

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة جوهرة القلوب

hi sir , how are you ? i hope ur fine & well

Exercise: Conjugate the verbs expressing past habits

I ( to drink ) coffee very much

I used to drink coffee very much

He ( not to be ) selfish when he was living here

He didn't use to be selfish when he was living here

The weather ( to be ) so cold in this town

The weather used to be so cold in this town

Why she ( to hate ) him though he ( to be ) very kind

Why did she use to hate him though he used to be
very kind

Wonderful,Lamia.Everything is correct

Thank you

أنور الزناتي · 2014-02-02, 00:16

السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته
أحببت أن أمرّ من هنا لألقي التحيّة و أسلّم على أخي و زميلي عثمان.
بالمناسبة قد أشاركك في هذه الصفحة في قادم الأيام. أرجو أن تكون
في صحة جيدة... تحيتي

صدق العطاء · 2014-02-02, 06:36

ارجووووووووووكم ساعدنوي في انجلزية في حل
ممكن حل هاد write a paragraph about the advanced technology in the future in which you speak about your predictions using :may/might/to be able

ath111 · 2014-02-02, 09:22

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ماريا2

ارجووووووووووكم ساعدنوي في انجلزية في حل
ممكن حل هاد write a paragraph about the advanced technology in the future in which you speak about your predictions using :may/might/to be able

The technological field is getting more and more developed all over the world.In the future,technology

may bring several new things to people.Concerning communication,a means of communication more

developed than the internet may be invented and people will be able to communicate with one another

more quickly than they do now.For transport,scientists might well invent a car that flies.The future may be

the time of robots which may well do everything for man.They may ****,serve,shop,and even do the

homework for students

ath111 · 2014-02-02, 09:23

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أنور الزناتي

السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته
أحببت أن أمرّ من هنا لألقي التحيّة و أسلّم على أخي و زميلي عثمان.
بالمناسبة قد أشاركك في هذه الصفحة في قادم الأيام. أرجو أن تكون
في صحة جيدة... تحيتي

حياك الله بألف خير يا أخي

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