For that who owns my heart

[عبد الله 22]

السلام عليكم أرجوا أن

[amel nina]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبد الله 22

السلام عليكم أرجوا أن يتم تصحيح لي هذه الفقرة التالية وشكرا

Last emotion with you
maybe it was wrong but it's honest

When I was there in a hopeless place. and I look for my dreams go away; when my emotion's give up ; under your careless;
I loss sense of the life; but never yours break my ambition; someday I will be come back; but I never forget the first injury ;I’m deeply infected in all my being.Yes I think it's punishment of the life.
I do not knew why this happened; where; when.; Just one thing!! yes just one thing!! we are known. You are thief of my emotions. I am still looking for it but its real the last emotion with you.

Last emotion with you
maybe it was wrong but it's honest

When I was there in a hopeless place. and I looked at my dreams go away; when my emotions gave up ; under your carelessness;
I lost every sense of life; but never yours breaking my ambition; someday I will be coming back; but I'll never forget the first injury ;I’m deeply effected in all my being.Yes I think it's punishment of the life.
I do not know why this happened; where; when.; Just one thing!! yes just one thing!! we are known. You are thief of my emotions. I am still looking for it but its real the last emotion with you.

[قمر البتول]

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