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2011-12-18, 17:46 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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Hate U hate U and Hate U
Title: Hate you hate and Hate you By: Karim Cherifi To: Number One Deceiver I never Thought of that Damn Day I never Forget that Damn Day My Heart was stabbed by a big knife bad memory that still disturb me for life It was better to kill me instead of what you did In the pain prison I was convicted I was the one who Give you happiness and U the one who gave me sadness U did it you're so heartless so worthless from that day I feel sickness Yeah I get used to be yours you used to be Mine at the end U left me Yeah In your love I was believing On me U were deceiving My intention was to carry on as partners U meant to exploit my Kindness I had heart but U had stone I think Love is really Gone I had a blood U had a wine I was just like spring sunshine I had maind but U were Blinde I was kind U were the Devil maind A man like me is hard to find I Remind calm was my sign you promised that on me you'll bind Now from me U hide That kills me a thousand times Now I can't believe in love I confess U affected me I'm a man A man with a strong sensitivity A man who suffer from casualty A man who don't use Brutuality A man who cherished U A man whose luck is so few A man with an unconditional Love A man who appreciate the love A man who is strict for his love For you I was ready to die But from your love you deny For U I will never cry On hating U I'll intensify I never never mean to hurt I never want to Forget I was always with U I felt U wherever I go I never meant to deceive only wounds I did receive My Tears are so precious Can't Imagine I'm Ambitious I'll keep struggling Don't worry she is comming I still Have a little hope your love is like a dope Just like candle in Dark Like clearness in Fog U will miss my hug My heart is so Extended My power is not expended My life still expanded I was your best chance still they still to chase the thing that left is Menace That's the life experience Hey fence the consequence Does he talk better than me Does he love U Indeed He'll never love U like I did He'll never care for U like I did He'll never miss U for real He'll never feel U Like I did He'll Never protect U enough He bought U forceless I though U priceless No just get out my world that's my final word I Hate U Hate U and Hate U
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2011-12-18, 18:37 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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2011-12-19, 14:05 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | ||||
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OMG like i'm watching a really love story movie words are good chosen from the heart words are honestly wrotten it's a magical pen your pen HHHHH that's the consequence when It come to my pen He is always afraid of me That I'm hard working as I told you before when it become to Love matters My writing is full of rhymes why I don't know? you're Suffering man your heart is bleading i can Feel u.. your words like you're Screaming But silently I'm not suffering My heart is normal My words are telling the truth I am just acting like a real man I really believe in Love I love the one who I decide to love but believe me when I feel that I got deceived from the one Who I loved It really hurts and that caused me a real flop at that time but I've a special characteristic I think that I'm not the only one who has it but I think only the real man has these characteristic which is I love with my heart I take risks but when it come to my Honnor I 'm against the world.....my matter was just like that she deceived me so I felt that my Manhood is touched so I decided to remove that Girl from my maind that took a real effort but believe me I feel nothing more for that Girl... But I'm not expecting her to come back....I'm not begging because if I do that so I should be a Girl and she would be a Man You get what I'm saying.......I am not going to revenge because there is something which is called "bad consequence" you know the "Moneychasers" she is doing like that.... She is just like a Toy of Luxuries and fake world....I don't blame her because she is mentally Sick when some one buy himself or buy herself priceless it's a shame and no one would give a damn reaction. she will feel Guilty seriosely cause she lost a Good person like you Yeah I expect that for real But whatever I don't care but can i ask u something is the word "Hate You" is really From ur heart i mean you Mean it ?? HHHHHHHHHH when I said "Hate" I meant another strong bad word for life but you know it's a shame to say it right here so I just put the word "hate" and I feel that it doesn't reveal my real feeling bnecause In another site I said a real stong bad words hhhhhhh my simple answer to your answer is: I only write what I feel I swear so the meaning is too clear "On gouverne les hommes avec la tèteon ne joue pas aux échecs avec un bon coeur" |
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2011-12-19, 14:06 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | |||
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Common everybopdy else 27 visiters no comments it's terrible believe me hhhhhhhhhhh....Just a word hey common don't be lazy It's for you evcruy body right here no one special commonnnnnnnnnnn |
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2011-12-19, 14:53 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | ||||||||
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Didn't it ? اقتباس:
what's this feeling cause i'm just trought it اقتباس:
Yeah now i see it's normally i think ur not the only one who has this characteristic cause when u love someone u love him/her with a honor i can get it and whatever happening keep ur honor up of everything اقتباس:
you're alright i really saw some people and after it i said like they are mad or crazy or something like that like they haven't even a heart they acting like a toys making themselves toys to their lovers "as they say...!!"and i don't know the reasons yet of course they keep on saying it's "Love" but i don't know that love make you a toy to who you love !!! i mean it's an insane matter i mean.....!! this is horrible Oo [QUOTE] Yeah I expect that for real But whatever I don't care[/QUOTE] No u should Care cause here you're winning more self respecting ! it's a good matter 4 me ^.^ اقتباس:
Omg you're so evil hhhhhh anyway dnt explain more i guess i know this word / Life is like that Day to you and day On you we keep making the good things from the bad things that happend to us we draw our smile according to the tears steps on our face This is The LIfe Just Smile C'mmon I wanna se ur Smile ^______^ |
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2011-12-19, 15:10 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | ||||
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[QUOTE=shin hyun;8281556] Yes Put this words Wrotten with a pain I've nothing to say more than I said because you said what I maent to be said hhhhhhhhDidn't it ? Don't Try To Tell me more Cause i know Exactly what's this feeling cause i'm just trought it Yeah now i see it's normally i think ur not the only one who has this characteristic cause when u love someone u love him/her with a honor i can get it and whatever happening keep ur honor up of everything you're alright i really saw some people and after it i said like they are mad or crazy or something like that like they haven't even a heart they acting like a toys making themselves toys to their lovers "as they say...!!"and i don't know the reasons yet of course they keep on saying it's "Love" but i don't know that love make you a toy to who you love !!! i mean it's an insane matter i mean.....!! this is horrible Oo اقتباس:
You're the only one who give More and more attention to my poems .....I really consider that I'm going to forget it never ever |
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2011-12-19, 15:22 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | ||||
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writing is my life i went i went literary section just for that L a n g u a g es is my Passion learning more that what i'm going to this is my dream / Yes and the secret is that we have kinda same thinking (ideas) arnt you agree with me ?? |
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2011-12-19, 17:03 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | |||
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i just Love this kind of interst |
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2011-12-19, 17:04 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | ||||
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2011-12-19, 17:17 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |||
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Hey don't you want to read my last poem "Algeria's mùost wanted"???? |
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2011-12-19, 17:31 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | |||
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Sorry i didnt see it |
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2011-12-19, 17:37 | رقم المشاركة : 12 | |||
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wow what an amazing poem karim...i really adoore it..thank you very much for your hard work |
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2011-12-19, 17:43 | رقم المشاركة : 13 | |||
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Thank you Illina actually i've another one please check it "Algeria's most wanted"
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