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قديم 2010-12-22, 20:25   رقم المشاركة : 1
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Africa is one of the most important contunent in the wold. It have abaut 56 country most of then have the same history. Because they were colony of european countries. Alegria and tumsia are of then . They are african countries. They situated in north african they consedered as agate to africa Which make then very attractive. Alhough algeria and tunisia have the same geological situation but they have a lot of differncies.

Algérien population have a big history with frensh colony similar to the tunisian population. Both of then made a lat of resistance and battle to be free nation. Like the algerian population made a decession to make a revolution agamst the frensh colony demanding thier right and the independence tunisia to have made the same in addition to that algeria and tunisia help each other with ideas wapen and money. also algérian and tunisian population have a smilar montality. They want to be free and independence.

In contrast to algérian area tunisia have smalest area with frew population. Algéria have a large population about 35 million inhabitant. They meed a lot of things. Different to tunisian .also algerian rely on natural wealth such as oil petrol hes econouy different to tunisia it rely on.touriste And port other things To the arbic wold and europe. Inaddition most of Algérian area are sahara which led to dicrease of agricaltural producation in contrast. To tunisia have in increase of agricultural soil. producation becaise algeria and tunisia make escchange betwen us spesealy in economy.

Algeria and tunisia are similar in history of thier nation. but they are different in area and developing of the countuy.









 


قديم 2010-12-23, 09:56   رقم المشاركة : 2
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Africa is one of the most important coniunents in the world. It have about 56 countries.Most of them have the same history because they were colonies of european countries. Algeria and tunisia are of them . They are african countries. They are situated in the north Africa .They are considered as a gate to africa therefore they are attractive. Although; Algeria and Tunisia have the same geographicall situation they have a lot of differences..

Algeria and Tunisia have a great history with french colony Both of them fought the french to free their nations. Like the algerian population made a decession to make a revolution agamst the frensh colony demanding thier right and the independence tunisia to have made the same in addition to that algeria and tunisia help each other with ideas wapen and money. also algérian and tunisian population have a smilar montality. They want to be free and independence.

In contrast to algérian area tunisia have smalest area with frew population. Algéria have a large population about 35 million inhabitant. They meed a lot of things. Different to tunisian .also algerian rely on natural wealth such as oil petrol hes econouy different to tunisia it rely on.touriste And port other things To the arbic wold and europe. Inaddition most of Algérian area are sahara which led to dicrease of agricaltural producation in contrast. To tunisia have in increase of agricultural soil. producation becaise algeria and tunisia make escchange betwen us spesealy in economy.

Algeria and tunisia are similar in history of thier nation. but they are different in area and developing of the countuy.










قديم 2010-12-24, 10:44   رقم المشاركة : 3
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Africa is one of the most important coniunents in the world. It have about 56 countries.Most of them have the same history because they were colonies of european countries. Algeria and tunisia are of them . They are african countries. They are situated in the north Africa .They are considered as a gate to africa therefore they are attractive. Although; Algeria and Tunisia have the same geographicall situation they have a lot of differences..

Algeria and Tunisia have a great history with french colony Both of them fought the french to free their nations. Like the algerian population made a decession to make a revolution agamst the frensh colony demanding thier right and the independence tunisia to have made the same in addition to that algeria and tunisia help each other with ideas wapen and money. also algérian and tunisian population have a smilar montality. They want to be free and independence.

In contrast to algérian area tunisia have smalest area with frew population. Algéria have a large population about 35 million inhabitant. They meed a lot of things. Different to tunisian .also algerian rely on natural wealth such as oil petrol hes econouy different to tunisia it rely on.touriste And port other things To the arbic wold and europe. Inaddition most of Algérian area are sahara which led to dicrease of agricaltural producation in contrast. To tunisia have in increase of agricultural soil. producation becaise algeria and tunisia make escchange betwen us spesealy in economy.

Algeria and tunisia are similar in history of thier nation. but they are different in area and developing of the countuy.
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