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Hi, Radia i like your paragraph and i've added some ideas
The telephone is defined as a device for transmitting and receiving sounds over long distances ,it's very usefull invention since it has many advantages for people .
First, one of the most important advantage of telephone is we can call any one in any space and at any time.
Second,the telephone has different options like the time and the date,games,take photos,videos,awakening ,calculator or checking dictionary that they help us.
Third, it allows us access to the internet to watch Film, check our profile in social networks and update our status wherever we are.
Finally,the telephone is very necessary and favorable, so we must benefit from it