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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة zoubidaas

خسارة خويا حنا درنا هذي الفقرة في القسم ولكن انا كنت غائبة وماكتبتهاش

ولكن تفضل فقرتي درتها انا وصححتها الاستاذة وقاتلي صحيحة :

Dear Kirsi
I thank you for your letter , it's kind from you and I really appreciate that . Now it's my turn to tell you about my self and my country
My name is ......... I'm ....... years old . I study in high school . I always go to school on foot , I get up early to prepare myself for school . On weekend I get up late ; I help my mother at home and I revise my lessons
Now after I introduce my self , I introduce my family to you . my family contains : mum and dad , two brothers and me . My parents work , my grand brother study in high school and my young brother study in middle school
We live in Algeria . Algeria is very big and beautiful country , we have " Makam el chahid " . Algeria called country of one million and half murder
So thats all of my self , I hope that you love me

salam... it's an acceptable issue...
I've done some adjustments on it
that's better

Dear Kirsi
I thank you for your letter , it's kind from you, and I really appreciate that . Now it's my turn to tell you more about myself and my country
My name is ......... I'm ....... years old . I study at a high school . I always go to there on foot , I get up early to prepare myself for school . On weekends, I get up late ; I help my mother at home and revise my lessons .
Now you’ve known more about me , what about my family? . my little family contains : mum and dad , two cute brothers and me . My mother’s a housewife such as yours and my dad’s a teacher , my grand brother is studying at a high school too and my little brother’s studying at a middle school .
We live in Algeria . Algeria is a very big and a wonderful country , we have " Makam el chahid " . It’s called the country of one million and half Martyrs.
So that’s some informations about myself & my country, I hope you love me …
Bye and take care
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