friendship

[starahalece]

hello every one
i whrote this poem about friendship tell me what do you think about it
it dosn't metter to feel love
if your be loved dosn't like you
so be nice and make friends
then they will love you
if you need them they will help you
and they will always be with you
just don't forget what is friendship
the others will never forget it too
but remember if you have many friends
just one who deserves you
so keep your feelings secrets
till you meet him he will understand you
if you have a problem he will help you
and if you made a misstake he will forgive you
don't think if you have too many friends
that you are the most luky person in the world
because some day they will let you
but you true friend will stay with you

[chebili16GB]

gud bgnng !!!

[starahalece]

thanks
but it is not the begening

[لبيبة المسلمة]

really nice

Amazing

thanks

[starahalece]

thank you
very mutch

[بوقرة الزعيم]

HI
I THINK THAT YOU ARE Poet project
Complete this lines

[لينة المتفائلة]

wooow
hi how are you doing !!
sweet


amazing

[فروليتة]

nice , very good carry on

[Ramzicsc]

I don't really want to sound rude or anything, but c'mon let's be serious here guys.. If you want him to get better, you need to tell him the truth. That cannot be called a peom simply because it doesn't have the basics, it's full of mistakes and the grammar.. Man I teared apart when I read it.. You need to work on your grammar first, I'll give you some advices if you'd like to, I've been writting since 5 years now.

[Ramzicsc]

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