The Permanent Stain

[sofmega]

There was Times Where everybody Know their Lives
And now i see no one will reach the end neither survives
cause your love baby love will make me come alive
throw pain and suffer you're the symphony that never revives

but sure there's days your pictures is stuck on my mind
i held my eyes and wipe tears cause that only get confined
i trust there's no chances cause I'm walking in this path all blind
i wish for this can have that magical rewind
cause your love baby love can turn stars aligned
permanent stain made me tougher this is the leave against prevailing wind
it's not finished yet i hope you enjoy but i never finish my work huh !!!!!

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Nice piece I like it even if I don't prefer this kind of works but I respect your tenendcies bro you're doing good keep it up

[Katy Pretty girl]

i think u'r words r so deep
it's good
to try to express u'r feelings and put them in poems
so as everybody can see how great u r
keep it up bro
u'r sister katy will always be here to cheer u up
peace
katy*