i Don't knOW whaT's Wrong

[bouchra bou]

I don't know wht's wrong
I feel I'm not any more that strong
I lost my words;I can't express
I feel that I will fail instead of success
Can any one tell me why???
I want only to cry
I just wanna know why you left
In your abscence I lost my strength
You used to be my only friend
But when I needed you;you left my hand
I won't believe your words again
Because of you I abide this pain
I didn't think you are like this
You don't deserve my feelings
What's my bad to abide your hurt???
I regret every thing wish I can forget
All the smiles I smiles a day
NOw I just need to change the way
I will fleape this page with pride
It's enough I can't any more abide

hope u like it§!!!!!

[براهيم جموعي]

i liiiiiiiiiiiiiike it

[bouchra bou]

thanks a lot for passing sweetheart

[بوقرة الزعيم]

goood work
we wait the new of you

[algerienne04]

Greaaat dude ^___^ !

[bouchra bou]

thanks for all of you
your comments encourage me to do my best
THANK yOu so much

[Asolvip]

It's so cool , u know u express ur feeling the way I do,I started publishing my poems herein this web site and I wish u can get the chance to read them*/

[english girl]

i like it too
simple words but deep meanings
waiting more
thanks

[bouchra bou]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Asolvip

It's so cool , u know u express ur feeling the way I do,I started publishing my poems herein this web site and I wish u can get the chance to read them*/

thc a lot for ur comment
happy to hear that u write the way i do
sure i'll read them

[bouchra bou]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة english girl

i like it too
simple words but deep meanings
waiting more
thanks

thank u so much english girl for passing
u know
for me when i write poems i make sure to use simple words than can be understood by every one but i like sending deep meaanings through them

[Asolvip]

Ur welcome sweetie I'll try to put 2 poems a day I hope u would like them