صفحة خاصة بالإنجليزية

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

استاذ ممكن تحح لنا تعابيرنا لم يبق الكثير


اري ان اضع بعض التعابير الاخرى من فضلك

تفضلي بالتعابير ضعيها هنا و سأصححها لك

[abir2000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة abir2000

my answers

:

reading comprehension :

1) the text is an e-mail
2) true or false
(jack didn't meet tom yesturday ( true
(the boy died in accident ( false
3) i choose the right answer
the sender is jack
the driver could n't stop the car because he was driving very quickly
4) i refer to jack
who refer to the boy

mastery of ******** :

1) while i was leaving for the hospital yesturday , i witnessed an accident
she caused a problem last night when she was talking with him
2) he has n't seen his brother for years
i've watched this movie since eight o'clock
3) i've alredy received an e-mail from my friend
have you ever been in space ?
he hasn't replied him yet
4) ai/ = why , line/
ei/ = grey , came/
written expression :

From: Bob@yahoo..com
To: John@hotmail..com


Dear John

I am very sorry my friend, i was typing a text you've asked me about, suddenly, the light went off, i will write it again tomorrow

.

Yours Bob

can you correct teacher

[~ دروب الخير ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

السلام عليكم استاذنا الفاضل ....


اامنى ان تصحح لي هذا التعبير ! و يتمركز موضوعه حول التلوث البيئي .....

no one can deny that pollution is a dangrous disaster...
Nowaday..all the organisms suffer with the pollution
....and this is result of throuwing waste ..negligence and technological development...so we must keep our environment for
our safety from illnesses and because our world is in danger


التعبير مختصر جدا

ارجوا التصحيح

هذا التعبير من فضلكم

[~ دروب الخير ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

thank you so much sir

this is my ansewr

1-an e-mail
2-true -------false
3-jack
4-he was driving quickly
5-i refer -----jack
6-who refer ----the boy
mastery of ********
was leaveing----------------------------------witnessed

causeed--------------------------------was talking


1- he hasn’t seen his brother …for..years
2- i’ve watched this movie since .eight o’clock.

)
1- i’ve already received an e-mail from my friend) ………………………………………………….
2- have you ever been in space ? …………………………………………………………..
3- he hasn’t replied him yet

grey-line-why-came


vert-----------/qi/
bleu-------------/ei/

اريد تصحيح هذا الحل

[dikra1999]

مواضيعك رائعة

[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

السلام عليكم استاذنا الفاضل ....


اامنى ان تصحح لي هذا التعبير ! و يتمركز موضوعه حول التلوث البيئي .....

no one can deny that pollution is a dangrous disaster...
nowaday..all the organisms suffer with the pollution
....and this is result of throuwing waste ..negligence and technological development...so we must keep our environment for
our safety from illnesses and because our world is in danger


التعبير مختصر جدا

ارجوا التصحيح

Peace be upon you
I will correct if nobody minds

well,the first sentence you said disaster,it's better to say phenomenon
the second sentence,suffer from not with
we say suffer from pollution then put a comma,and this is resulted from throwing waste
concerning throwing with o not ou
then put then put a comma after throwing ,negligence,and technological development
then So capiltalized after it we put a comma
So,we must keep our environment clean for our safety or you can say that to prevent from illnesses then carry on your sentence

best of luck

[~ دروب الخير ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة toulay

peace be upon you
i will correct if nobody minds

well,the first sentence you said disaster,it's better to say phenomenon
the second sentence,suffer from not with
we say suffer from pollution then put a comma,and this is resulted from throwing waste
concerning throwing with o not ou
then put then put a comma after throwing ,negligence,and technological development
then so capiltalized after it we put a comma
so,we must keep our environment clean for our safety or you can say that to prevent from illnesses then carry on your sentence

best of luck

بالنسبة للفواصل و غيرها فانا دائما استعملها فالكتابة على الكراس

لم استعملها لانني اسرعت في الكتابة لذا كما تلاحظن التعبير جد قصير


شكرا على الملاحظات اتي الغالية


جزاك الله الجنة

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة abir2000

can you correct teacher

Everything is correct

Thank you very much

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

اريد تصحيح هذا الحل

Good

just a typing mistake I think

caused not causeed

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

بالنسبة للفواصل و غيرها فانا دائما استعملها فالكتابة على الكراس

لم استعملها لانني اسرعت في الكتابة لذا كما تلاحظن التعبير جد قصير


شكرا على الملاحظات اتي الغالية


جزاك الله الجنة

عذرا لكن يجب أن تستعملي النقط و الفواصل كما يجب هنا لكي يكون التصحيح كاملا

كما يجب عليك أن لا تسرعي في الكتابة كي لا ترتكبي أخطاء

الشكر موصول للأخت toulay على التصحيح و المتابعة

[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

بالنسبة للفواصل و غيرها فانا دائما استعملها فالكتابة على الكراس

لم استعملها لانني اسرعت في الكتابة لذا كما تلاحظن التعبير جد قصير


شكرا على الملاحظات اتي الغالية


جزاك الله الجنة

العفو اختي لا شكر على واجب
امين يارب العالمين
بالتوفيق

[ath111]

Text
Amine is a teacher at middle school.He told his pupils how school used to be when he was young.This is what he said : « Years ago,school didn’t use to be the same as it is now.At primary school,we used to study Arabic and French.In Arabic,we used to study the Arabic l.a.n.g.u.a.g.e,Mathematics and the Islamic education.At middle school,we used to study many other subjects like English,Biology,Physics,Art and others.
Pupils didn’t use to be as noisy as the pupils of today.They used to do their home work regularly and respect their teachers.Most of the pupils used to be good.
Parents also used to control their children at home and at school.That’s how school used to be not like the school of today. »

Part one :
Reading Comprehension Activity one : Read the text and choose the best title.
a) How School Should Be
b) How School Will Be
c) How School Used to Be
Activity two : Say if it is true , false or not mentiond
1-Shcool, in the past, used to be the same as it is now
2-Amine used to like English very much.
3-Pupils,in the past,used to respect their teachers
Activity three : Answer the questions according to the text.
1-Did Amine use to study English at the primary school ?
2-What did pupils use to do regularly ?
3-Did parents use to control their children ?
Mastery of ********
Activity one : Give the right form of the verbs.
1- Amine ( to use to go ) to school by bus.
2-He ( not to use to eat ) at the school canteen.
3- He misses his schoolmates very much.If he has time,he ( to visit ) them next week.
Activity two : Combine the two clauses with a relative pronoun who or which.
1- I haven’t yet read the book. You gave me the book yesterday.
2- We can’t help the pupils.The pupils don’t help themselves.
Activity three :Find in the text four words that contain the diphthongs

au/ cow / ei / play/



Part two :
Written Expression : Primary school is not like middle school. Try to remember when you were a pupil at the primary school and in short paragraph,tell us about :
- the subjects which you used to study
- the teachers who used to teach you
- the uniform that you used to wear
-the time you used to spend at school
- how you used to go to school

[abir2000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

Everything is correct

Thank you very much

thank you a lot teacher

[akbi]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة akbi

sorry to disturb you again
could you please correct the written expression

thank you very much sir

[~ دروب الخير ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

text
amine is a teacher at middle school.he told his pupils how school used to be when he was young.this is what he said : « years ago,school didn’t use to be the same as it is now.at primary school,we used to study arabic and french.in arabic,we used to study the arabic l.a.n.g.u.a.g.e,mathematics and the islamic education.at middle school,we used to study many other subjects like english,biology,physics,art and others.
Pupils didn’t use to be as noisy as the pupils of today.they used to do their home work regularly and respect their teachers.most of the pupils used to be good.
Parents also used to control their children at home and at school.that’s how school used to be not like the school of today. »

part one :
reading comprehension activity one : Read the text and choose the best title.


c) how school used to be
activity two : Say if it is ,true false or not mentiond
1false-shcool, in the past, used to be the same as it is now
2not mentiond-amine used to like english very much.
3true-pupils,in the past,used to respect their teachers
activity three : Answer the questions according to the text.
1
-did amine use to study english at the primary school ?
no;he did not
2-what did pupils use to do regularly ?

they used to do their home work regularly

3
-did parents use to control their children ?
yes ;they did
mastery of ********
activity one : Give the right form of the verbs.
1- amine used to go to school by bus.
2-he did not use to eat at the school canteen.
3- he misses his schoolmates very much.if he has time,he will visit them next week.
activity two : Combine the two clauses with a relative pronoun who or which.
1- i haven’t yet read the book which you gave me yesterday.
2- we can’t help the pupils who don’t help themselves.
activity three :find in the text four words that contain the diphthongs

au/ cow / ei / play/

au/ how °°°°°°°now

today/ ei / they °°°°°°°°°
part two :
written expression : Primary school is not like middle school. Try to remember when you were a pupil at the primary school and in short paragraph,tell us about :
- the subjects which you used to study
- the teachers who used to teach you
- the uniform that you used to wear
-the time you used to spend at school
- how you used to go to school

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