New day ... New life ! I'm strong !

[Asolvip]

** * * * * Part 1:


New day new life !
My brilliant rayons can cut your jealousy as a knife
So you'd better stop that strife
I'm the bomb I'm the rocket
I can't show you everything I gotta keep some in my pocket !
You can call me official*
I'm the star I'm *the initial
I don't care *I'm not artificial**
I'm the important , I'm the main*
I don't cry anymore under rain*
I got over every pain
I deleted every nightmare from my lain
No feelings,I'll *always use my brain .
**

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My life *was *bad ... Too sad
I never felt *Alive, I was always dead*
I got no home , not even a bed
But my dreams never got out of my head*
I lost too many friends*
But I won a lot instead*
Life is a circle ! Now look at me*
I'm the queen ! I always wear my diamond rings
I'm a bird I got wings*
I can hear my danger bell rings*
My pen is a guitar and My words are its strings


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I was always wrong !
But now I'm the strong !
My way was so long*
You used to treat me like a dog
Can't u see me now ! I'm covered by fog
U are such a crazy green frog
You told me you're love maker !
No, you're a heart breaker
I'm your *heart taker*
Watch out, I'm a good baker*
My poisonous *****es will kill you hater*
I'm good , good , greater , greater*
Die hard* .. Faker !
You said, I've got a million sin*
I'm satisfied about myself ,so,I won't lose my grin

** * * **

[Asolvip]

Hey guys....
Well, I just gave you my new poem ... I feel good those days .. So I hope you'd like it ...
Part 3 : my poisonous c ooki es will kill you hater



I'll be absent for few days too but I'll always keep shining

[Katy Pretty girl]

good one
i love strong girls
like u
i'm happy for u too

[Asolvip]

Thanks my princess perry !
I'm trying to do my best to have a better life .. And to come over all the obstacles that stand in my way

[aliass]

great poem from a greater poet
thnx for sharing such a great poem dear
keep it up always

[Hillin]

Hi every one
well done sister
KEEP IT UP

[شدى الياسمين]

hey it's really a good one i liked it
keep it up

[that's me]

this a is not just a poem this is a sweet cake . thank you it is very delightful

[○•ميسون•○]

exelent and perfect poem

this is all what I need

thenq you my dear

[Asolvip]

thank guys just wait for the new fresh topics and don't forget the old ones too

[أم حمزة]

I do really appreciate it, seems like it comes from a powerful girl's spirit ....

good for you, keep it up

[براهيم جموعي]

sa7a ftourkem

wow really i like it

especially this part

My life *was *bad ... Too sad
I never felt *Alive, I was always dead*
I got no home , not even a bed
But my dreams never got out of my head*
I lost too many friends*

[لزرق]

[QUOTE=Asolvip;1053636182][FONT="Georgia"][SIZE="3"][COLOR="Blue"]** * * * * Part 1:


New day new life !
My brilliant rayons can cut your jealousy as a knife
So you'd better stop that strife
I'm the bomb I'm the rocket
I can't show you everything I gotta keep some in my pocket !
You can call me official*
I'm the star I'm *the initial
I don't care *I'm not artificial**
I'm the important , I'm the main*
I don't cry anymore under rain*
I got over every pain
I deleted every nightmare from my lain
No feelings,I'll *always use my brain .
**

would you please explain this poem to me

[Asolvip]

[QUOTE=لزرق;1053987351]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Asolvip

[FONT="Georgia"][SIZE="3"][COLOR="Blue"]** * * * * Part 1:


New day new life !
My brilliant rayons can cut your jealousy as a knife
So you'd better stop that strife
I'm the bomb I'm the rocket
I can't show you everything I gotta keep some in my pocket !
You can call me official*
I'm the star I'm *the initial
I don't care *I'm not artificial**
I'm the important , I'm the main*
I don't cry anymore under rain*
I got over every pain
I deleted every nightmare from my lain
No feelings,I'll *always use my brain .
**

would you please explain this poem to me

you want to know ok
this part means that a person is making himself the only important thing ; he doesn't care about others and what they say about him
and he will get over all the sadness
and it's specialized for a girl !

[لزرق]

it is fantastic poetry thanks
would you write some about the situation in egypt