death melody

[نَازِكْ]

Death melody
I used to hear the winds whisper
Telling me your story won’t wither
I used to watch the rains fall
But every time my tears turn into a waterfall
And with every fallen tear
A symphony of loneliness spread in ma ear
Washing away ma fear
Yeah;that melody was s so clear
But gloomy clouds were drawing near
Now all what I hear is a tearful voice as my heart is fading away
In that mire of hatred I’m astray
There; I’m drowning ,my horizon vanishes away
Inside me, a tornado is about to form
That voice is going on
As life gives me a curse
Having no choice of course
It makes me realize, that voice is mine
Looking around ,every thing seems fine
But silent wraps its self around me
My misted eyes are hurting me
I wanna hear that symphony
There’s no doubt it’ll calm me
But I still hear myself crying
Telling me: you are dying
It’s singing a death melody
Every tune expresses a tragedy
I hear it over and over
I just want it to be over
Now it’s saying:
“a heart full of hatred someday will blow up
Happiness you are looking for you’ll never catch it up
Your dream, your story Tragically will wind up
I’m losing my breath
I just wanna a break
I wonder, how far can I keep stepping forward?
The past is a dead memory, why can’t i understand?
I have to give up nostalgia


It caused only Insomnia
Instead of hatred, I have to learn another word
And find a way out my monochrome world
Where even the wind lies
otherwise
Sooner or later I’ll be that forgotten story
Afterwards
Death melody will sign its victory
.................................................. .....
HOPE YOU 4LL LIKE IT
IF U FIND OUT ANY MISTAKE PLZ TELL ME

[Maria Rap 4 Ever]

wonderful
i liked it so much

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

my favorite type of poems
^^
i'mma read carefully and come back to comment

[نَازِكْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Maria Rap 4 Ever

wonderful
i liked it so much

thanx sis alots for dropping by

[نَازِكْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Jimmy The Rap Soldie

my favorite type of poems
^^
i'mma read carefully and come back to comment

ah that's good
hope u 'll like it
you're welcome bro any time

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انتصار1995

ah that's good
hope u 'll like it
you're welcome bro any time

i definitely like it
no! ... i love it ^^ it's an amazing catchy piece of art
i'm so impressed
the way u express ur feelings and use the sad nature as a main element in ur poem .. makes it so special and different
congratulations sister
u're amazing
^^

[نَازِكْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Jimmy The Rap Soldie

i definitely like it
no! ... i love it ^^ it's an amazing catchy piece of art
i'm so impressed
the way u express ur feelings and use the sad nature as a main element in ur poem .. makes it so special and different
congratulations sister
u're amazing
^^

thank ya brother for dropping by your words mean a lots for me
indeed i was trying to reflect ma heart, my thoughts my soul honastly
nah i'm not that much good i'm just trying ^^

[Black_Poison]

WoW WoW...and WoooooW
Victora....you really amaaaaaaaaazed me
really...felt every word flows inside my heart and melt and get mixt up with blood drops and flows slowly...slowly in veines
i reaaaaaaally liked it....you are a diver
it's ok to dive in...as long as you remember to comeback to the surface and take another breath....then dive deeper to reach your aim
Good job
Carry on

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison

WoW WoW...and WoooooW
Victora....you really amaaaaaaaaazed me
really...felt every word flows inside my heart and melt and get mixt up with blood drops and flows slowly...slowly in veines
i reaaaaaaally liked it....you are a diver
it's ok to dive in...as long as you remember to comeback to the surface and take another breath....then dive deeper to reach your aim
Good job
Carry on

oh sis it dosent worth at all
it's just my nosens khh
a diver ; but i'm afraid of drowning cus at somepoint u 'll lose ur breath
just like revenge at somepoint u wont be able to stop
otherwise if there's someone wait for u in the surface and if that one thinks about u , u'll deeply return
but i'll dive to reach my aim yes i'll
thnx sis thanx alot
yeah thank ya sweetheart

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انتصار1995

thank ya brother for dropping by your words mean a lots for me
indeed i was trying to reflect ma heart, my thoughts my soul honastly
nah i'm not that much good i'm just trying ^^

and it's indeed reflected in every single line
and don't say u're just trying ... u're over trying ... cuz these poem says how professional u r

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Jimmy The Rap Soldie

and it's indeed reflected in every single line
and don't say u're just trying ... u're over trying ... cuz these poem says how professional u r

i 'm really speechless
cus no onr tells me that be4
so thank ya brother
may ALLAH bless you

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انتصار1995

i 'm really speechless
cus no onr tells me that be4
so thank ya brother
may ALLAH bless you

u're so wlcm sister
may ALLAH bless u too
^^

[شمــوس]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انتصار1995

Death melody
I used to hear the winds whisper
Telling me your story won’t wither
I used to watch the rains fall
But every time my tears turn into a waterfall
And with every fallen tear
A symphony of loneliness spread in ma ear
Washing away ma fear
Yeah;that melody was s so clear
But gloomy clouds were drawing near
Now all what I hear is a tearful voice as my heart is fading away
In that mire of hatred I’m astray
There; I’m drowning ,my horizon vanishes away
Inside me, a tornado is about to form
That voice is going on
As the life gives me a curse
Having no choice of course
It makes me realize, that voice is mine
Looking around ,every thing seems fine
But silent wraps its self around me
My misted eyes are hurting me
I wanna hear that symphony
There’s no doubt it’ll calm me
But I still hear myself crying
Telling me: you are dying
It’s singing a death melody
Every tune expresses a tragedy
I hear it over and over
I just want it to be over
Now it’s saying:
“a heart full of hatred someday will blow up
Happiness you are looking for you’ll never catch it up
Your dream, your story Tragically will wind up
I’m losing my breath
I just wanna a break
I wonder, how far can I keep stepping forward?
The past is a dead memory, why can’t i understand?
I have to give up nostalgia


It caused only Insomnia
Instead of hatred, I have to learn another word
And find a way out from my monochrome world
Where even the wind lies
otherwise
Sooner or later I’ll be that forgotten story
Afterwards
Death melody will sign its victory
.................................................. .....
HOPE YOU 4LL LIKE IT
IF U FIND OUT ANY MISTAKE PLZ TELL ME

SALAM ALLAH
Came to die songs
Greek hysteria
Brought to life again
Excellent Intissar

[نَازِكْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة شمــوس

SALAM ALLAH
Came to die songs
Greek hysteria
Brought to life again
Excellent Intissar

وعليكم السلام
oh my presious sister is here
thnk you sister for passing it cheers me up
n_________n

[Asolvip]

Fantastic ... I swear I could feel the words touching my heart .. Cool