Betwween hope and pain

[safoufa97]

do you hear me
do you feel my pain
do you still love me
coz your love is in my vain


do you hear me when i cry
do you think about me
do you imagine my picture in the sky
or even in the sea
do you always ask god the question why
you do you like to be with me
coz that's true love which make us fly
and make us free


so when you're lost and don't find your way
and there is no wone by your side
just keep trying and wait for beautiful day
and don't forget to fight

this is my first poem hope you like it
and don't forget to write a comment

[sarouna22]

good work dear

we are waiting for more

peace

[safoufa97]

thank you sarouna22
i am happy you liked it

[nadjah.09]

[safoufa97]

you r welcome sis

[ضيفي فتحي]

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[the sad girl]

wow i think you have a great talent

thanks for the nice poem

[starling]

hope and pain stay two things opposite to each other however we should be aware and put in mind that hope leads to a good feeling and trust in God worship so accept my coming on your article

a teacher of english

[noor al houda]

i can't believe that is your first poem... you are so good honey i like it

[nounouss]

good work girl..
u r talented so don't stop writing
carry on.
may allah bless u

[that's me]

this is love:between hope and pain ,although I do not love " lve" any more but those words really touched me
thanks s much

[lovely friend]

yor words can touch and effect even a piece of a cold ice. really loved them. thank you for your topic