Way to hope

[الماسة البنفسجية]

we have many dreams and wishes
but if we want t acquire them
we must be deligents
maybe we will be wrong or be fail
but we mustn't be unefficient
we must tryand try
not stay and cry
because crying is not the solution
we must trust in ourselves
annd try try till success
and acquire our dreams
with this thing
life will be sweet

[bila00b]

very good but try to write your poems with rhymes ...good and keep going

[الماسة البنفسجية]

I just express my thoughts thank you brother for your encourage

[spy4me]

nice thoughts girl go on

[الماسة البنفسجية]

thank you brother for your encrage

[Fairy_Rina]

very good one u should carry on , i liked the ideas in it

[الماسة البنفسجية]

thank you a lot sister

[خـواطـر]

nice
thanks sis

[loutsse]

اطلب ولا تضجر من طلب
فافة الطالب ان يضجرا
الم ترى ان الحبل لطول تكراره
في الصخرة الصماء قد اثرا

[علي الجزائري الحر]

جزاك الله خيرا
جعله الله في موازين حسناتك
موضوع قيم
اخوك في الله محمد