For all the broken wings

[.kiki]

Hello memebers! wish you all are doing well

those are some lines I wrote last year, i kept them in a word document and it's till now that I had the guts to share them with you guys

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...For all the broken wings

...That could never fly

...For all the desperate souls

...That can’t wait to die

.Life should be this way

!Or else we would never enjoy it

.There should be a black day

So we recognize what’s hope to live the white and see it.

.Never cry upon past stories

!The virus of our minds is memories

...Let your spirit dance with winds of storms

...And your heart beats higher than thunder

:And look down to the world and say

I’m a part of you... I’ll die one day

in you... But I’ll never give up to you...

be honest with me in your replies, huh! ^^ thnx for reading

[كنوز المعرفة]

omg !!! so amazing
girll you have the words
really wish you all the best
carry on
you are not like the rest
you are the best

[.kiki]

woOow ! emmm... thank you dear, i'm not worth all this
definitely not
thank you very much though. Honored that you like them

I appreciate it

[the fly boy]

Nice words sis Kiki
this is life
tht's why we should be like a strangers
coz we r only visitors in this life

[.kiki]

yes brother, well said

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thank you for passing by

[.kiki]

broken wings

desparate souls

weak beating hearts

and life still goes on

[Wallace]

Great! Thank you


Wallace

[.kiki]

you're welcome! thank YOU

[Hillin]

Nice words
coming from a talent friend
Thank you kiki for sharing us such meaningful lines
hope to read more and more
so
GO ahead
Best of Wishes

[.kiki]

very pleased to read your cute reply, friend

i'll try too bring you guys my best

thank you all, take care !

[Black Blossom]

what a cheerful words
All thanks that u shared it
Keep your pen wet

^^

[.kiki]

ah you're welcome, you're welcome for your 'thank you' and you're welcome here with us, I see you're brand new hh
very honored that your first participation was this one, here in my page, thank you very much, I appreciate it

but dear, why would you put 'hell' as where youlive? dear that's not so nice you know, try to change it ok? ^^ best wishes

peace

[that's me]

how beautiful ! but it will be even more beautiful if we achieve these values and deal with our problems in such a wise way

[.kiki]

thank you sis! glad you seem to understand what I pointed to through these lines

so ^^ good luck in making it more beautiful in your deary

peace

[BouDi9]

simply enjoyable Poem nice words , keep on hun