fake Smile

[حكاية قلب]

It's easy to let it go
pretending ...

that i'm still okey
not confusing
not upset

i feel like i'm so well
don't worry i feel happiness
now you can walk away
.
.
.

then staying all night
feels like i'm falling apart
tears are falling down
fire in my heart

yes i said i'm okey
in the fact i was pretending
all that time
my smile hiden a pain
a pain that made me kinda insane

i tried to forget
i tried to pass everything by
but i couldn't success
it's harder then i thought once

harder to forget
harder to press delete
harder to ignore
harder to send it away..

it's not easy for me
heart to carry
something like you did once
i tried to protect you
and now i fail

sorry girl
i'll never forget you
even if you did !

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

That great Girl it is one of the most amazing poems of you about Frienship it's so good ____When i read tghat words I felt them of mine or something like this The fact that your words are from reality nothing else that's why they used to be said "write your feeling " so as to get a good poem that's good keep on that level and I remark that your level is improved step by step keep on that progression that's so great ___Thank you

[حكاية قلب]

That great Girl it is one of the most amazing poems of you about Frienship it's so good ____When i read tghat words I felt them of mine or something like this The fact that your words are from reality nothing else that's why they used to be said "write your feeling " so as to get a good poem that's good keep on that level and I remark that your level is improved step by step keep on that progression that's so great ___Thank you

Thank you for this sweet beautiful encouraging words
really when i read ur comments i feel more self confident
and feel hapiness
i'll keep writing don't worry
with this encouraging words i will


me too i feel like we share kinda same feelings
in this subject



keep visiting and commentin my poems
this is so gentil from you

thanks


^__^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

You're welcome

[أميرة العرب]

hi g!rl

i want to congratulate you 4 this great poem

u are so good in writting poems and disigning pics

you are on the right rode

take care

your sis

[حكاية قلب]

hi g!rl

i want to congratulate you 4 this great poem

u are so good in writting poems and disigning pics

you are on the right rode

take care

your sis

thank you my friend for this sweet comment
it's really encouraging me for

keep on writing more poems


^^


Thank you 4 2nd time


peace

[أميرة العرب]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة פـگآيـۃ قَـَلِبْ}

thank you my friend for this sweet comment
it's really encouraging me for

keep on writing more poems


^^


Thank you 4 2nd time


peace

saléém

never mind

any time

luv yaa
ur sis

[mina1995]

wow!! it's an amazing poem ! well done girl ^^
to be honest it really touched my heart ..it brought old sad memmoris h_h
keep on the good work sis!!

salem

[Bouchra mimi]

Fake smile the title remindes me of what i wrote in these few days
its a short paragraph of waht i wrote


you smile but you wanna cry, you talk but you wanna be quiet , you pretend that youre Happy but you 're not

Believe me , your poem was very
touching i almost cried seriously

it was amazing thats all i can say

just keep it going sis .

[Amany Queen]

Wow it's awesome ! Coz it stems from ur heart
the title has attracted me , when i had read it i just said : Woow
u've done a great job girl , carry on !

[fifita14]

Amazing poem ♥ it touched me deeply

Congrats sist well done jst keep goin'

#peace

[NOUR IMAYA]

sorry girl
i'll never forget you
even if you did !



thankss

[Estrella Negra]

Wow , it touched my heart
Ur words are just amazing
u r great , never stop writing
keep it up