i'll say Goodbye

[حكاية قلب]

Feel so much pain
i've forgot who i am
the girl who respect everything
make her dreams number one

feel so much gelty
i don't understand
am i the one you loved
or you hate..

can't believe you anymore
like i've been killed by your hands
stop standing there
and tell me why

why you leaved me and didn't come back
you told me that everything will be okay

but nothing seems so well
you've let my tears on my checks
like you never felt the same

i've been hurted more than one time
i'll never let my self
hurts again

you want to go now but please
don't come back
and if you will


i'll say Goodbye


.
.

.

By Me

[حكاية قلب]

hey friends
i want you to judge
on my last words i wrote

^^

[ali gourgache]

i really like it..........keep doing well..............Good Luck

[حكاية قلب]

i really like it..........keep doing well..............Good Luck

Thank You So Much
^^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Yeah Girl Your words as usal are well chosen...

for me I'm impressed....is that the truth you

feel pain? don't worry that is the sign that

you are sensible that the kind of real girls

do!!! if someone left don't say nothing...they used to say

"if you love something let it go...if it comes

back it's yours" that's the appropriate reply

to your writing....for the structure of your poem

I think you respected the coherence of your

ideas but there is a little problem...don't worry it's very

simple....there are some grammatical mistakes

for example "You'll go this time" you can say

"you want to go or trip or leave me" like this

because "will" is of the futur "this time" is of the present.

a little revise can do the job okey

I liked the last lines ...really...before i saw you demanding our

views about the last words ....they are so good and

of meaning and strongness...it's something like

"my heart is closed" haha that sounds good

keep doing like that.

[حكاية قلب]

Thanks a lot for your comment
and your opinion
so happy cause you liked it
é_é


^___^
and for the mistake
yeahh i solved the problém
Don't worry
^^'
thank you a lot
cause this really encouraging me
for Carrying on

thank you
so much

^^
p:

[sourire hili]

to me it's ttooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooppppppppppppppppp thank you so much sister

[حكاية قلب]

to me it's ttooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooppppppppppppppppp thank you so much sister

You're welcome
Thank You For your comment
too


^.^'