Alone in The Dark

[amine pop 4 life]

Give it all up
Waiting for you to come
Tears for my eyes drop
And my heart beats like a drum

I don't why I don't know how
All I know is I'm walking with the clouds
I see the the lights gone and every thing is black
that's how I knew I'm allone in the dark

For the first time
Every thing was perfect
But now I'm wondering
Was it worthin' it

Sorry My Inspiration disconnected I will continue later .....

[نَازِكْ]

somehow i like it it really worths more lines so we are waiting for the next lines
darkness at the begining seems to be so kind n a good company but once you wont it it will be a suffocating pain that you wanna abandon but it would be too late ,once you chose that path you can't come back nor looking back to the things you left behind ,so get out that place now or never ;;
keep it up

[amelhope]

i really liked your topic
i'll wait your next lines and i hope that you'll bring sunshine with you good luck

[amelhope]

and t me
it's better to stay alone than having someone who makes your life misery
so hard

[amine pop 4 life]

I was just trying my ability in poems coz it has been a long time ago without writing so I'd prepare one more time before post it because I failed that time .....
And I'm so greatful to have you by my back because your words exlposed the adrinaline in my mind ( I don't know if it really exists there) but I guess that I feel so energitique So I can write a thousband line without giving it up .... so thank u INTISSAR

[amine pop 4 life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amelhope

and t me
it's better to stay alone than having someone who makes your life misery
so hard

Once you find the one who deserves to be with u and makes you happy you can speak to the darkness and make it wait But remember that the darkness will be there for u to support you if any thing happend to u some day

And some said before " My loneless is too pperfect for me than being withj some one wjo doesn't even know that I'm existing next to him

[amelhope]

darkness is always there for those who are hopeless and lonely .... and so on
but GOD also there for everyone so hmd

[amine pop 4 life]

tahnk u for supporting me Hope and by the way I'd write it all newt time inchallah so wait for it
your name has a great sense and it gives us new inspiration and makes us look to the life with an optimist eye

[amelhope]

thanx
waiting for new don't be late

[أميرة العرب]

saléééum

i liked it so much

but i agree with انتصار
that it's worth more lines
so get motivated very soon to finish it

keep sharing
good luck

peace

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amine pop 4 life

Sorry My Inspiration disconnected I will continue later .....

hhhhhhh u always be the same u never change hhhhhhhhhhh

[فاطمة الحالمة]

oh the life ..the dark life ...make us cry ..always run in a black way ..but we must to change our sadness with hope colors ..that 's deficult but it's the best solution to face our problems ..this is the life ..sometimes pain and grief... and anothers happiness and gifts..


i like your words..and i think that you've a great futur ..later
good luck..
smile..