hey ! chek my poem

روح قسنطينة · 2015-01-30, 16:23

last summer i wrote a poem 2 my best of friends , n i wanna share it with u 2 tell me about ur opinions
K and M
I know that i hurt you
And i broke your heart too
My face is sad and blue
So gloomy and i just wanna spew
Oh! i was like a dirty jew
Rude like that i lived in slew
Run away is what i wanna do
Yesterday, is the day when i knew
Knew that i was as bad as my shoe
Man tell me what shall a little girl do

Help_Me · 2015-01-30, 16:57

I'm sorry KM

روح قسنطينة · 2015-01-30, 17:18

yeah ! hhhhh
i'm so sorry kM

روح قسنطينة · 2015-01-30, 17:19

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I'm sorry KM

? tell me did u like the poem or not

Help_Me · 2015-01-30, 17:21

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? tell me did u like the poem or not

i liked the sound of the sentences end
but, i didn't understand the words

(( ضياء الدين )) · 2015-01-30, 17:23

great little girl

Yùceef · 2015-01-30, 17:28

Omg please change the 'jew' word its the religion of jewish people :/

راغبة 18 · 2015-01-30, 17:39

I like the poem, the only thing that disgust me is the antisemite line that wasn't really necessary.
As muslims we should treat others the way we want to be treated =)
و يمكننا الإستدلال بسيرة النبي صلى الله عليه و سلّم

Yùceef · 2015-01-30, 17:55

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I like the poem, the only thing that disgust me is the antisemite line that wasn't really necessary.
As muslims we should treat others like we want to be treated =)
و يمكننا الإستدلال بسيرة النبي صلى الله عليه و سلّم

Yeep dats True

روح قسنطينة · 2015-01-30, 18:55

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i liked the sound of the sentences end
but, i didn't understand the words

it's ok i'll explaine it 2 u if u like

روح قسنطينة · 2015-01-30, 18:56

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great little girl

thnx bro
!!! but how did u knoww that i'm a girl

روح قسنطينة · 2015-01-30, 18:59

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Omg please change the 'jew' word its the religion of jewish people :/

i know what do we mean by jew
n i don't mean i'm a jew just understand the meaning of the sentence plz
it's just a likening u got it now

روح قسنطينة · 2015-01-30, 19:02

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I like the poem, the only thing that disgust me is the antisemite line that wasn't really necessary.
As muslims we should treat others the way we want to be treated =)
و يمكننا الإستدلال بسيرة النبي صلى الله عليه و سلّم

ok i'm sorry
thnx for ur advice i'll try 2 change it ok

" just don't be angry from me sis " raghiba

روح قسنطينة · 2015-01-30, 19:08

oh ! i was as bad as my loo
??? what about this is it better

(( ضياء الدين )) · 2015-01-30, 19:37

hhhhh it s clair ( lokan ja tfol kon kteb poem bel hiroglifia) .d