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Hourse Solitary Mind

“Solitary Mind”
02.11.2013

I hold no grudge; I don’t wanna feel neglected
No attention for the mess but the mess was started
Everything is passed; now it belongs to the past
I opened brand new page; I deleted the scars
Used to call me adorable, used to be honorable
Used to be adaptable, and now I’m just an horrible
They think I’m an envious, worthless and helpless
Coz they found me ambiguous, ruthless and heartless
How these bastards grew up? They’re Sick and silly
When will they stop talking about me the yellow-belly?
No time to waste they love backstabbing, cannibals
I just taste no taste in a society full of animals
Relations turned me insane; they gave me a raw deal
Try being real; how I’m supposed to feel
Alone and proud, still I ride
Still I rise with a solitary mind

Solitary mind thinking so deep;
Life goes on everyday another trip
Solitary mind Relations I rip;
Coz friendship became so cheap

I just got enough, I don’t need no friends
They just gonna leave ya When ya being frank
The money bring greed, the greed bring venality
Especially the crafty that has no personality
Karim-Rap-4-Life is not fool like Simple Simon!
To put his trust in the world full of demons
I can’t keep chasing friends, and be a Wishy-washy
I don’t like begging them, I hate being a Pushy
I can’t control my anger, so please don’t push me
I hide my wounds in case a friend acted scratchy
I don’t trust the heart because the heart is a Squashy
I rely on my brain to avoid any trouble rashly
My heart is so normal it’s not made from a stone
I’m just keeping silence, I live my sadness alone
I don’t wanna bother y’all keep my friends from my dark zone
Coz the ugliest stuff to a mane is when he moan

Solitary mind thinking so deep;
Life goes on everyday another trip
Solitary mind Relations I rip;
Friendship became so cheap

Forget it like it wasn’t, my dignity I warrant;
Yes I drop my Laments; but only for my parents
I’ve buried my sentiments; I’m always on advancement
Yow Snow white you know my circumstances
Ya daddy asked so much ya mammy wanted to sell ya
I’m not that Richey Rich and I’ve no romance to tell ya
Every story has an end and mine is an example
The fact made me blowing this freaky-sample
No need for relations, I got no romanticism
I got my own reasons to hold a tight criticism
I spit the lyrics of IZM; I’m a student of realism
If you wanna lie, lie I believe in behaviorism
I don’t need an irritation; I don’t wanna be in a vortex
I’m not good for tests no guarantee for consequences
These obvious lines telling ya I’m doing fine
Solitary hymn written by a solitary mind

Solitary mind thinking so deep;
Life goes on everyday another trip
Solitary mind Relations I rip;
Friendship became so cheap

The trouble in my life, is after I was going deep
I realized the wolves behind the masks of sheep
I think about tomorrow every night before I sleep
Will I live or will I die or will I have eternal sleep
I became an anti-social the people I vomit
I was born with a habit, realist to no limit
This is my tendency need no Sympathetic
I don’t give a damn I am just an apathetic
I got a heart and a brain; I know how to make em mingle
If you got hurt sorry, I never said that I’m an angel
Trying to be social for me is an inconsequential
I got snitches from people; my state’s consequential
Living in this jungle; we say no confidential
This is my definition; and I prefer to be a single
It’s a peaceful way to live my life high
Just the way it is, the solitary mind
Word up!


Give someone a raw deal = to treat someone unfairly or badly.
Simple Simon = a name used to refer to a foolish man or boy. Originally it was the name of a foolish boy in a nursery rhyme.
Wishy-washy = not having clear or firm ideas or beliefs.
Pushy = trying hard to get what you want, especially in a way that seems rude
Push me = don’t make angry, or don’t annoy me.
IZM = concerning ideas and beliefs for example: realism, racism…etc.



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قديم 2014-06-10, 21:49   رقم المشاركة : 2
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you're the man in the mirror!!! Just like always a shiny star in the dark bu' wait a second!! there's no life on this planet 15 seen and no comments!!! Believe me Karim It's hard to know what are thinking about and it's so hard to believe that these words came out of ya mind But trust me you're on top like always and u deserve the best and all the best bro so keep it up !!! and don't forget chasing your dreams (Don't forget that you were the one who said that )









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قديم 2014-06-11, 11:05   رقم المشاركة : 3
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Ahla
Amine How are you doing man;
you mean I explained your thoughts like this!
well I wrote this since a long time but I've noticed that the forum was asleep till now it is but with topics like yours and Intisar it will be awake again
the problem we have here is that members read and go but don't reply
that's the reason behind the laziness here
emmm! about dreams I don't have any dreams they all gone with the wind once
boom
ayo amine thank ya for passing brother it's kind of you to put a reply
yesterday it was 15 views = 0 reply
today is 22 views = 1 reply
actually I expected that I told you the forum is really deserted I feel pety for it :/
but still another one will put a comment and else I really don't know if i'll have some comment but whatever it is I accept it
good luck Amine









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thank u Karim no matter what happened u know that you are bigger than that ok and this forum was not like what I imagined b4 Coz I thought that I'll find comment; relpies that motivates me but unfortunantly there's nothing good here exept some members who makes this place alive (Like U Karim - Intissar- and don't forget me )










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قديم 2014-06-12, 11:45   رقم المشاركة : 5
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افتراضي

Yeah I told you it's deserted since one year and half maybe coz the main moderator is absent or members are passing their holidays on the beach










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قديم 2014-06-13, 10:51   رقم المشاركة : 6
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i'm speechless ! it's beyond amazing !
i wish i had your vocabulary , it's outstanding










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قديم 2014-06-13, 18:33   رقم المشاركة : 7
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افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Silly Me مشاهدة المشاركة
i'm speechless ! it's beyond amazing !
i wish i had your vocabulary , it's outstanding
Salam My sister thanks for passing by
well it's not that impossible to have an enormous Vocabulary
it comes with practice and reading
Remember that everyone was once with 10 words only...









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قديم 2014-06-14, 17:44   رقم المشاركة : 8
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افتراضي

sorry brother i am late i guess
well ,first reading it's amazing seems like i'm gonna learn too many words
i'll be back to comment because it desreves a long discussion
& welcome back










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قديم 2014-06-14, 20:09   رقم المشاركة : 9
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انتصار1995 مشاهدة المشاركة
sorry brother i am late i guess
well ,first reading it's amazing seems like i'm gonna learn too many words
i'll be back to comment because it desreves a long discussion
& welcome back

Hello Talented Intisar nice to see you around here
you're late but it's not a problem
take your time and enjoy










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قديم 2014-06-15, 20:34   رقم المشاركة : 10
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It's so realistic just as you usual and like you said you're really realist to no limit, i know you have your reasons and i do believe in every single word written above ,
solitary mind opens for you the whole world ,it deepens your thoughts and let you realize how to deal with ppl and to give every one what he deserves .Also being away from people let you avoid too many troubles
we all got too many wounds from being surrounded by wrong persons and we often heal them with new stitches i mean by being alone but at least we will no longer suffer from cannibals as you 've mentioned
i like it as a whole but these lines were so damn great
I don’t need an irritation; I don’t wanna be in a vortex"
I’m not good for tests no guarantee for consequence
"
being so social will deeply involves you in more than one vertex
what i really like about the things you write is that your writings are such a pure mirror that reflects your thoughts
and don't give a damn about the few replies look at me you're the only one who replies on my topics and i appreciate even though i'll never stop because it's my way to say" i exist"
thank you bro i learnt too many new words waiting for "ain't playin "don't be late .









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قديم 2014-06-16, 23:01   رقم المشاركة : 11
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انتصار1995 مشاهدة المشاركة
It's so realistic just as you usual and like you said you're really realist to no limit, i know you have your reasons and i do believe in every single word written above ,

Yeah It's the best way to be known and no body tries to play with you. thank you for the fact of believing what I say











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قديم 2014-06-16, 23:04   رقم المشاركة : 12
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انتصار1995 مشاهدة المشاركة

solitary mind opens for you the whole world ,it deepens your thoughts and let you realize how to deal with ppl and to give every one what he deserves .Also being away from people let you avoid too many troubles
Yeah it seems good when you're young but when you get older it'll be the worst plan you did in your life but for me I don't have too coz when it come it's too late coz i'll be already gone I have that idea that I won't last so long I'll be gone and
The good die is young the bad one is old










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قديم 2014-06-16, 23:19   رقم المشاركة : 13
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انتصار1995 مشاهدة المشاركة

we all got too many wounds from being surrounded by wrong persons and we often heal them with new stitches i mean by being alone but at least we will no longer suffer from cannibals as you 've mentioned
I was surounded by a lot of them and after what they did I realized that I need to do something and solitary was the key... I wish it could be another solution but unfortunately there was not!

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انتصار1995 مشاهدة المشاركة

i like it as a whole but these lines were so damn great
I don’t need an irritation; I don’t wanna be in a vortex"
I’m not good for tests no guarantee for consequence

yeah it came without thinking deeply


اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انتصار1995 مشاهدة المشاركة

what i really like about the things you write is that your writings are such a pure mirror that reflects your thoughts
and don't give a damn about the few replies look at me you're the only one who replies on my topics and i appreciate even though i'll never stop because it's my way to say" i exist"
thank you bro i learnt too many new words waiting for "ain't playin "don't be late .
nah I don't care how many comments I got but I'm sure that more than a dozen will bookmark it and read it carefully and I don't blame no body if he didn't leave a comment but I can tell them that their comments mean a lot to me and they give me the power to write again
but it's okay I got two of the best writers in the section now
Intisar and Amine and that's " elbaraka "
and for the Ain't playing it's done since 6 months or more but I just feel lazy to post it but I'll inshallah just hold onn
thanks million times for your annalysis I hope you really learned some words and I forgot to put the definition of
Yellow belly = Coward

gooooood luck sister *










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قديم 2014-06-17, 17:02   رقم المشاركة : 14
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life مشاهدة المشاركة
Yeah It's the best way to be known and no body tries to play with you. thank you for the fact of believing what I say


never mind because i know exactly that situation
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life مشاهدة المشاركة
Yeah it seems good when you're young but when you get older it'll be the worst plan you did in your life but for me I don't have too coz when it come it's too late coz i'll be already gone I have that idea that I won't last so long I'll be gone and
The good die is young the bad one is old

don't say things like that allah is the only one who knows what 's written he knows when our missions is done
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life مشاهدة المشاركة
I was surounded by a lot of them and after what they did I realized that I need to do something and solitary was the key... I wish it could be another solution but unfortunately there was not!

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it was your choice so you gotta carry it along till the end and it's the best in my opinion
yeah it came without thinking deeply
that's what made it special i guess you know the most brilliant thoughts come by their own

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nah I don't care how many comments I got but I'm sure that more than a dozen will bookmark it and read it carefully and I don't blame no body if he didn't leave a comment but I can tell them that their comments mean a lot to me and they give me the power to write again
but it's okay I got two of the best writers in the section now
Intisar and Amine and that's " elbaraka "
and for the Ain't playing it's done since 6 months or more but I just feel lazy to post it but I'll inshallah just hold onn
thanks million times for your annalysis I hope you really learned some words and I forgot to put the definition of
Yellow belly = Coward

gooooood luck sister *

that's mean a lots to me bro really ;i'll be waiting and i'll always read for you because you're the boss bro the members writing boss.
yeah of course i did so that i'm happy ,in fact i forgot to ask about it i searched or it but no results so thank you really









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قديم 2014-06-17, 18:57   رقم المشاركة : 15
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Hey brother .. remember me !!! hhhhh its been nice reading your writings again bro , missed it!!

i read your poem for like 3 times & im havin flashbacks to everything happened be4 and many things were said before
but i totally agree its better to be alone cause these days even your closest people to our heart can't take us when we'r in a bad times

I just got enough, I don’t need no friends
They just gonna leave ya When ya being frank

this caught my eyes !! which friends u r talkin about ! i mean from the forum or real life
i want to ask u about black poison, is she replying on ur emails or anything cause i can't seem to reach her


peace










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