I'm So Alone

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

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[Hillin]

Hi
a Great impressive poem
I really felt sorry for that Kid
he should n't taste the pain of being 'alone "at this age
but rather he has to,like all the other children,have as much as fun,play with peers,out of harm's way, and learn more from his parent
Life was so harmful for him
seemed to be unfair
It was a hard experience for him
Howver,looking at the bright side I may say "he"is gonna be a good,gentle ,and strong man since he challenged life when he was child nd was given too much lessons about how to survive
just I would like to add sth which Has been mentioned above and I really you may say I don't agree with it anymore
it's
Hate
we shouldn't let such "negative" word invades our pure soul
thu we get enough harm from others
^^
By the way,the poem contains some spelling mistakes nd when I stopped by some words really they made me somehow confused such as Straglle_struggle,ingury_injury......... nd I said to myself"OMG how should it be written"nd I tried to write them on draft without looking to the PC ^^LOL
Thank you Friend for sharing
really I liked
CONGRATULATION
Keep it Up
BW

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Thank u very much sis ..... i kinda agree with you in that ahte issue but ... it's realy hard ... i tried and i'm still trying .... and about those spelling mistakes ... that was cause of the fast typing ...didn't realise ... by the way ... i didn't sleep all night ....lol ... thank you very much for stoping by and .... i apreciate your opinion

[امين التيارتي]

i feel ya man,
but u gotta be strong,
U're a good writer
good job
i appreciate u bro

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Thanks for the support brother

[امين التيارتي]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Jimmy The Rap Soldie

Thanks for the support brother

U're wlcm , any time

[biba94]

beatiful words expres a wonderfu lmeanings
usuly i dislike this kind of sad music
but i liked yours
well done brother
keep on

[دينا11]

waaaaaw you r amizing it's a graet topic

[ROU7 EL-WARD]

oh my god

your words are really touching

u've make me cry

u got a fabullas talent

i wish u find a friend who understand u and complete the road with u

god bless u

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Hi family members

I'm realy very very very thankful my brothers and sisters .... thanks for your support thanks for stoping by ... thanks for the friendly lovely words and expressions .... i'm realy happy just the fact that you felt how i once felt ... and you understood every word i put into this song ..... thanks

thanks ... my allah keep ya'll safe

[أميرة العرب]

hello my friend

well, actually for the 1st time of my life i don't know what to say


seriously it's the best song or poem i have ever read

caz i know it's from the bottom of ur heart

i have never been good in giving advices to orohens

my best friend lost her mother and i didn't know what to say

because i don't think that there are words or expressions that can make u cope with the bad facts

i'm really sorry for what u had to go through

u know life is tough

but i could feel that u are a great persone

so take care of ur mom and sisters

good luck bro

ur sister

peace

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Thank you very much sis .... yeah you're right ... life's tough .... but gotta know that ... if that did not kill you, it can only make you stronger ... and .... you know what all an orphan need is .... a sweet smile from a loyal sweet friend ... a shoulder to cry on .... cause all those words can do nothing and can not hide the facts as you said ... so ... thank you very much sister ... see ya round

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

hey homeboy I'm going to read it carefully then I'll reply ofcourse wow wow wow the Niggaz yeah Rap soldiers bro you attcked my impression man well done I'll be back I'll be back I'll be back mannnnnnnnnnnnnn yeahhhhh hhhhh

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Thank you very much homie .... i'll be around waiting for you ... peace out

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

and I liked the videos and the Dear Mama siging wow