confusing monologue poem

[Asolvip]

confusing monologue:
they've always told me : behave!
they are correcting my faults but they're writing my name on a grave
killing me is their own purpose not save
i won't get down , i'm brave
i drew million scar on my heart's door
if one of them nocks it again , i won't open it no more
i won't fall in the same trap as i did before
old mistakes never get repeated
all bad darkness must be defeatedblack souls , hurful holes, i'm fed up
burning tears , hands are throtteling me every time i wake up
killing rayons are penetrating my eyes
loud voices are screaming "surprise"
no personality ! no spirit !
you mustn't be that stupid !you should be wise!
you had million dream to realise!
you listened to people when the started to criticise
at the middle of the way
between yes and no you started to sway
you stopped you work and you started to play
you did no wrong
you just couldn't be strong
but your sadness won't be that long
so , you need to laugh and smile
just try even for a while
and try to reach your dream even it's hidden behind thousand mile..

i hope you like it

[takwa§zineb]

::very nice::

[Asolvip]

thank you so so much .... i feel much stronger with ur support

[ath111]

Yes,very very nice

Thank you very much

[Asolvip]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

Yes,very very nice

Thank you very much

you're welcome .... just wait for my new poems