Introduce yourself مساعدة

[pro_dz]

السلام عليكم
من فضلكم أريد المساعدة حول التعريف بالنفس (Introduce yourself), تصحيح الأخطاء أو اضافة بعض المعلومات

I Mohammed Riad, I'm 21 years old, I belong from Tlemcen. Currently I'm a civil engineer student at Abou-Bekr Belakaid technology faculty, I'm in master one level, structure specialty. .In my free time i like to practice soprt, especialy jogging in the forest.
I always want to grow up my knowledge and develop my self from the mistakes that I do.
My short term goal is to finish my studies and get a job in a good company and contribute to the development of my country.
I think it all about me.

Thanks for your help

[paloma.laila]

i'am mohammed i have ...years

[pro_dz]

First I think you mean I'm, secendly I think we can't say " I have 21 years old" we say " I'm 21 years old"
Please correct me if I'm wrong

and thank you !

[toulay]

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله تعالى وبركاته
My name is Mohammed Riad and I am 21 years old. I am from Tlemcen. Currently, I am a civil engineering student at Abou-Bekr Belkaid School of Technology. I am studying for my masters degree in structural engineering.


I want to continue to grow and increase my knowledge. I don't mind learning from my mistakes and bettering myself each and every day.


My short-term goal is to finish my studies and seek employment with a notable company in which I can contribute to the development and progress of my country.


In my free time, I like to practice sports. I especially like to go jogging in the forest.

بالتوفيق

[pro_dz]

Thank you very much