i need your opinion about this

[أميرة مملكة السعادة]

peace be upon you

today i'm gonna show u my first poem
i hope u'll like it and remember i really need your opinion about it

when i look in your eyes

i can see that you have a surprise
i don't know what is it
because i don't wanna open it
my be it's bad
than i will be so sad
i don't wanna lose you
in this world i'm living because of you
try to listen to my heart
and to know what it want
try to push the sadness aside
and plant the happiness in your mind
try to understand me
cause i need you to forgive me
just take care of me
and you will be a special for me
who says that i'll fall in love
and i'lll give all what i have
i remember when i was talking to you
i didn't know what is the mater with you
and when you talk to me
i can feel like this girl is not me

u can find my poems on my youtube channel : Chebaiki Djoumana
peace