♫Alone at home♫

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

My first poem,since I'm bored..
Hope you like it~

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*I'm at home alone*
*Suddenly I hear the ringing of the phone*

*I nearly die of fright*

*and it's late at night*

*There's no use of trying to sleep*

*and there's no point of counting sheep*

*A shiver came from my core*

*Because there is killer outside my door*

*I walk slowly to face my fate*

*I open to find that it's my mom looking great*

*I stare with a glare and say : WHY WERE YOU LATE?!*

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2013 AUGUST UPDATE : AS i read this again i find that the story doesn't make any sense to me anymore so i'm sure it is a bit confusing for you guys as well ... i'll make sure to do a re-do of this or atleast something similiar , it might take a while however as i have not written anything in a long loooooong LOOOOOONG time héhé but we'll see ;d ... till then thanks for everyone who commented ^^

[the fly boy]

Shame on you
you make me scared you almost give me a heart attack
for a sec I though maself watching SAW movie
hhhhhhhhhhhh
Nice poem sister
and the mom had a point
Why were you late
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try the sky stars counting next time

Thank you

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the fly boy

Shame on you
you make me scared you almost give me a heart attack
for a sec I though maself watching SAW movie
hhhhhhhhhhhh
Nice poem sister
and the mom had a point
Why were you late
+
try the sky stars counting next time

Thank you

Thanks and sorry i scared you ☺

[rola.29]

hello freinds
I liked your poem too much...
it's wonderful ...
you have the same problem than I, i can't sleep early too
i have to wait.. but a cup of milk should help you .
congratulations ... i wish you continue writing such poems ..
See you .. Good Luck

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rola.29

hello freinds
I liked your poem too much...
it's wonderful ...
you have the same problem than I, i can't sleep early too
i have to wait.. but a cup of milk should help you .
congratulations ... i wish you continue writing such poems ..
See you .. Good Luck

I'm glad you liked it ,thanks♥
I don't like milk though lol
I will,in the near future~

[rola.29]

Hi Ikram,
i don't like milk too.. but try it with chocolate ,...i wish you like it
see you my talented

[قمر البتول]

good job
the words are so wonderful and the poem is great
it's little bit scarey but i like it especially in the end
i hope you write an other poem and i wish for the best

[rola.29]

hi batoul how are you .. you know i didn't know you speak english too wonderfully ..
i'm just kidding
how are you ikram ?? do you sleep normally now?? hhh

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة قمر البتول

good job
the words are so wonderful and the poem is great
it's little bit scarey but i like it especially in the end
i hope you write an other poem and i wish for the best

Thanks,you're really nice ☺
Indeed,I will,in the near future~

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rola.29

hi batoul how are you .. you know i didn't know you speak english too wonderfully ..
i'm just kidding
how are you ikram ?? do you sleep normally now?? hhh

Hey there,i'm fine,what about you?
No,i can't sleep at all now thanks to the exams that are coming

[قمر البتول]

hi rola yes i do and ikram i hope you're fine too
so when you're going to write you other poem i hope is soon

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة قمر البتول

hi rola yes i do and ikram i hope you're fine too
so when you're going to write you other poem i hope is soon

I am fine,thanks for asking
i promise you that it will be in few days : )

[rola.29]

okay i khnow both of you are afraid and think that BEM would be such a monster
Take it easy guys, take it easy,
we should try some poems tomorrow at classroom batoul, shouldn't we??see you

[chaimouma]

ooooooooh fine joks tnx

[Black_Poison]

hi girl
you are really tallented
excellent job
you have a wild imagination hhhhh
i really wonder hat happened next

this poem reminds me of a song
Fireflies
by Owl City