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2010-09-17, 18:50 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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...if you know
i wrote this poem behind a reason.... If you know If you know how are deep my wounds If you know how many dimensions I'm living in If you know how I see the spaces getting narrow If you know how the hope stops when it collides with weakness If you know that my worlds suffer the loneness If you know that I am a king without a kingdom If you know that I am a stranger with my feelings If you know that I can't leave my prison because of words If you know which key may open my heart's door If you know what you want to know You'll know that the moon stopped calling me You'll know that the stars stopped shining to me You'll know that birds stopped singing to me You'll know that I still hear you You'll know that I never change
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2010-09-19, 12:04 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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Can i know the reason??okkkkkkkkkkk regardless the reason the poem is sooooooooo nice and i'm sure it's from the bottom of your heart.................Never give up .........waiting your answer |
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2010-09-19, 16:54 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | ||||
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ok, i can tell just that it was a reply for a girl's letter |
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2010-09-19, 20:48 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | ||||
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yours Ali |
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2010-09-19, 21:48 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | |||
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you're clever and curious
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2010-09-20, 13:45 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | |||
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thanks brother it's a kind from you waiting your new subjects
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2010-09-29, 15:00 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | |||
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if u know , u 'll know ,, Away from ur reason I like ur pen when he put the right word in the right sentence ,, |
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2010-09-30, 09:26 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | |||
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it's a good peom ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, and i hope that person will hear you whenever he or she is and trust me the real feelings and the deeper are always heared no matter what happen;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; |
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2010-09-30, 14:40 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | |||
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hiba ,دموع الوفاء thank you all
your comments motivate me for more |
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2010-09-30, 14:47 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |||
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i like this one |
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2010-09-30, 14:51 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | |||
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thank you zahra you're the best
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2010-09-30, 15:00 | رقم المشاركة : 12 | |||
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Tic..toc...tic..toc ! sounds like you broke up with a girl ...
Heart beating... a month, thirty days, one hour fifty nine minutes & twenty seconds to live. Ba-bump ba-bump ...Curious what's this ? a heart sickness , hard breathing, 2 steps, , a glance, a hope finally a silence. shut up! Crazy stares, one hundreds lives, 1000 reasons to die. This is creepy. closes eyes, this is a farewell. Good ! writing thumbs up ! * grin* hha i'm little dizzy so don't care so much abt what i wrote up. Peace |
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2010-09-30, 15:06 | رقم المشاركة : 13 | |||
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you're welcome
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2010-09-30, 15:36 | رقم المشاركة : 14 | |||
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