Gift to people I like

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Gift to people I like

Hey sorry to be late I Was busy writing some topics on “English Learning” section. I present this humble words to Djelfa members and sorry for those whom I did not mention their names, I decided to post it here.
I wrote this small poem in approximately one hour.
During reading you’ll find that this one is about a conversation between two Karims bad one good one, one written in black and the other in blue. I don’t know how the idea invaded my mind hhhh. Read it carefully and focus on the last lines hhhh, Enjoy J
Gift to people I like

Being against walk the walk talk the talk
I talk what I want to talk don’t care for the folk
Fight I except wherever I walk
I got no respect for others views
And my arm is here again and I’ve to use
I oppose coz I’ve nothing to lose can you suppose
Yeah, go ahead man;
I think cowards have hearts like a plastic
Got many friends lovers as fantastic
They’re popular even they’re sent to Jupiter
Me dima karah lonely just like black colour
Schools, universities and they got their seats
They got love in between they take places
They’re seen cute but they’re so rude
I see ya man
You’re Sinking in your solitude
People Always call you the dude
Oh man keep yourself out of this
You don’t deserve this do they really fit
And you Gotta trust the fates
Many gates oh baby many gates
Hey homie you’ve to listen to me
Every body is running from me
Why I always on my backyard
Making my Rap’s rhyme wild
Like Mike Tyson I was supposed to be
But never mind I believe in destiny
I’m sure your heart is pure
They’re the fool they need the cure
Be ready to hopefulness procedure
You’re hated by the double face
Wherever you go you leave a trace
You need to continue the race
Yeah, that’s the problem “you know”
No it’s not right for no more
Take a look to the old days before
And now!
A brand new persons real friends
Read what they wrote with their hands
Devil is widespread and this is a fact
Aspects like that you need to expect
You’re not lonely you got that, stand that
Djelfa’s members wish you the best
They’re loyal even they’re virtual
You need them just like car need fuel
Yay Yay
But I saw that in a different way
I was easy to take a fray
When I remember that I just laugh
I realised they’ve nothing except love
Oh my God I looked like I was negative
I tried to be positive even though sadness I live
Look how You’re sensitive
Now open your love’s package
Everybody deserves your message
hey look!
I arranged this for so long
But hopelessness tied my tongue
I must confess I was hopeless
Words I’ve said full of ridiculousness
Sorry it was not my intention
As Nana said
“When I mention your name
The pain I feel ashamed”
Attention
Sorry for every one I misunderstood
I like you but darkness was my mood

Oh man this tastes so Good
This is for every one don’t run
Black Poison just come back don’t run
Miss Cool come back here soon
Fly Boy hey thank you
غزلانhey thank you too
Xchow come back let’s go to the studio
حكاية قلب where’re you where do you go
إبتسام you made me write this you know
Hillin hey let’s keep playing
Amel Nina is waiting

Rola l’écriture mais bien sur le texte est dure
Quand je pense au passé le présent et le futur
l’état est fur et à mésure
Donc je fais des paroles contre la dictature
Je vos propose de reste des amis
Français ou Anglais c’est la même famille

Kiki I’m happy for you frankly
May May need you to forget the fight
Muslims hearts is white right
You all are Djelfa’s forum light
Eastside, Westside, North-side, Southside
We’re united in Algeria’s Inside
Administrators I need an upgrade J
Of course If you don’t mind J

[Hillin]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life

Gift to people I like

I see ya man
You’re Sinking in your solitude
People Always call you the dude
Oh man keep yourself out of this
You don’t deserve this do they really fit
And you Gotta trust the fates
Many gates oh baby many gates
I’m sure your heart is pure
They’re the fool they need the cure
Be ready to hopefulness procedure
You’re hated by the double face
Wherever you go you leave a trace
You need to continue the race

No it’s not right for no more
Take a look to the old days before

A brand new persons real friends
Read what they wrote with their hands
Devil is widespread and this is a fact
Aspects like that you need to expect
You’re not lonely you got that, stand that
Djelfa’s members wish you the best
They’re loyal even they’re virtual
You need them just like car need fuel
Look how You’re sensitive
Now open your love’s package
Everybody deserves your message
hey look!

This is for every one don’t run
Black Poison just come back don’t run
Miss Cool come back here soon
Fly Boy hey thank you
غزلانhey thank you too
Xchow come back let’s go to the studio
حكاية قلب where’re you where do you go
إبتسام you made me write this you know
Hillin hey let’s keep playing
Amel Nina is waiting

Rola l’écriture mais bien sur le texte est dure
Quand je pense au passé le présent et le futur
l’état est fur et à mésure
Donc je fais des paroles contre la dictature
Je vos propose de reste des amis
Français ou Anglais c’est la même famille

Kiki I’m happy for you frankly
May May need you to forget the fight
Muslims hearts is white right
You all are Djelfa’s forum light
Eastside, Westside, North-side, Southside
We’re united in Algeria’s Inside
Administrators I need an upgrade J
Of course If you don’t mind J

Awsome
Congratulations friend
Really it's wonderful
I liked...I liked it for two reasons
it's pretty expressive and Good Karim who won at the end
this is Great coz
I c that you're drawing a new good path
the path of hope
so ur"re n't hopless any more
you wanna changes
u struggle& challange
u're ambitious
and all these words means one thing..........HOPE
so Congratulation again
Oh by the way thank u for mentioning my name in your poem
it's really kind of u as it's my pleasure to be among those you like
Hope that there is no one u hate

Wishing u all the Best
Keep in touch

[.kiki]

!! peace up

welcome back, brother
Thank you very much for the unbelievably outstanding poem
it's absolutely an honor for Djelfa's family to have such a good, expressive, strong writer

keep it up

may ALLAH be with you in every step in your way, may He always keep you on the right path

best wishes

[ابتساام]

إبتسام you made me write this you know
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yes i know

[ابتساام]

دائما متألق ورائع

[shila]

w.o.w
mashaa allah
amaising

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

wow................... that's a great one home boy ..... i believe your place in the top .......... where you belong .......... besides 2pac and biggy ...... keep it coming dawg .... peace out

[lilo rok]

God ! l

While reading your poem I made up my own beat n start singing it ( like seriously have you ever thought of turning this poems into songs?! ) l

So yeah , I'm speechless for the moment ^^' "can't write a comment that you worth" , I give you a big "thumb up" keep it up n share what you have with the world ^^ , I mean who knows maybe a famous rapper will ask you to write his next song l

mmmmm...yeah I can't find anything else to say , just keep it up n inShallah you'll have a good future

Oh n in case you thought about the "idea" of turning it into a song I'll be here to design your "Album cover" I adore making posters with PS (I did some covers to my friends n they were satisfied with my work) l


Peace (can't wait to read your next poems) l

[amel nina]

that's really the most amazing poem I've ever read


I liked the subject you dealt with, good kareem and bad one, then the good triumphs over evil at last

your words are well chosen, there's a connection between the ideas and lines



and what i adored most, is that u included my name hhhhhhh, I really appreciate it from you

honestly, I'm so proud that our favourite forum has such a talent, I'm surely convinced that you'll have a promising future, u have to keep it up that way
cuz ur the best brother

[Hind_dz]

Wooow wooow wooow

I'm truley n honestly amazed by ur poem

u really R a great writer honestly .. i thought i was reading some rap song lyrics

keep it up

[♫ وهج الأمـل ♫]

Great job brother

I've read many of your poems but this one is completely diffrent

It's amazing

Keep writing you're great

[maymay]

May god forgive you..

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hillin

Awsome
Congratulations friend
Really it's wonderful
I liked...I liked it for two reasons
it's pretty expressive and Good Karim who won at the end
this is Great coz
I c that you're drawing a new good path
the path of hope
so ur"re n't hopless any more
you wanna changes
u struggle& challange
u're ambitious
and all these words means one thing..........HOPE
so Congratulation again
Oh by the way thank u for mentioning my name in your poem
it's really kind of u as it's my pleasure to be among those you like
Hope that there is no one u hate

Wishing u all the Best
Keep in touch

Hey nice to see you passing here, these one is one of my best writing personally I like it too much coz I feel it’s words conveying me positively better than previous ones. It’s expressive of course coz I did it in one hour for real I was amazed to write it coz I was thinking about Djelfa’s members, then I thought that I’ve to say something coz I noticed them falling apart it does not seem as we’re a family. I told myself I make a reaction maybe it’ll be the acquired one. For the matter of mentioning your names I always want to mention them, If I got old I would return to read them from time to time to recall your names even if they’re not real names but they mean at least something for me coz It’s called friendship, “My definition of friendship is…..No rules, no age, no race, no level, no time, no distance…..except Love and hope.”
Best wishes and Ramadan Karim.

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة .kiki

!! peace up

welcome back, brother
Thank you very much for the unbelievably outstanding poem
it's absolutely an honor for Djelfa's family to have such a good, expressive, strong writer

keep it up

may ALLAH be with you in every step in your way, may He always keep you on the right path

best wishes

Hey Kiki thank you for passing too, I really appreciate your comments. My writings would be nothing If there were not djelfa’s members encouragement. It’s my honor too to be among Djelfa’s family.
May ALLAH guide you through the right path. Best wishes and Ramadan Karim.

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

إبتســـــــــــام

Yeah yeah I swear
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شكرا و كنتم أنتم كذلك