pleaassseee help !

[sara roseblanche]

hey guys !! how are u doing ? i hope fine
well i need some help i have to write an advertisement for a pizzeria !
i have chosen shippy pizzeria *-* it's really a very good place to go if you search for a good restaurant
this is my paragraph ( if i made a mistake or u have another idea just tell me !! )

you like delicious hot pizza , don't you ? and you have dreamed of a quick nice service , haven't you ? well you'll find all these and more at shippy restaurant !
delicious pizza made of fresh aliments ... a relaxing lively atmosphere ... a very good service .. what else ?! don't lose time ! come and enjoy
open 7 days a week from 11 : 00 am to 23:00 pm
GARIDI 2

waiting for ur comments and participations ^^