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2014-06-10, 19:51 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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Solitary Mind
“Solitary Mind”
02.11.2013 I hold no grudge; I don’t wanna feel neglected No attention for the mess but the mess was started Everything is passed; now it belongs to the past I opened brand new page; I deleted the scars Used to call me adorable, used to be honorable Used to be adaptable, and now I’m just an horrible They think I’m an envious, worthless and helpless Coz they found me ambiguous, ruthless and heartless How these bastards grew up? They’re Sick and silly When will they stop talking about me the yellow-belly? No time to waste they love backstabbing, cannibals I just taste no taste in a society full of animals Relations turned me insane; they gave me a raw deal Try being real; how I’m supposed to feel Alone and proud, still I ride Still I rise with a solitary mind Solitary mind thinking so deep; Life goes on everyday another trip Solitary mind Relations I rip; Coz friendship became so cheap I just got enough, I don’t need no friends They just gonna leave ya When ya being frank The money bring greed, the greed bring venality Especially the crafty that has no personality Karim-Rap-4-Life is not fool like Simple Simon! To put his trust in the world full of demons I can’t keep chasing friends, and be a Wishy-washy I don’t like begging them, I hate being a Pushy I can’t control my anger, so please don’t push me I hide my wounds in case a friend acted scratchy I don’t trust the heart because the heart is a Squashy I rely on my brain to avoid any trouble rashly My heart is so normal it’s not made from a stone I’m just keeping silence, I live my sadness alone I don’t wanna bother y’all keep my friends from my dark zone Coz the ugliest stuff to a mane is when he moan Solitary mind thinking so deep; Life goes on everyday another trip Solitary mind Relations I rip; Friendship became so cheap Forget it like it wasn’t, my dignity I warrant; Yes I drop my Laments; but only for my parents I’ve buried my sentiments; I’m always on advancement Yow Snow white you know my circumstances Ya daddy asked so much ya mammy wanted to sell ya I’m not that Richey Rich and I’ve no romance to tell ya Every story has an end and mine is an example The fact made me blowing this freaky-sample No need for relations, I got no romanticism I got my own reasons to hold a tight criticism I spit the lyrics of IZM; I’m a student of realism If you wanna lie, lie I believe in behaviorism I don’t need an irritation; I don’t wanna be in a vortex I’m not good for tests no guarantee for consequences These obvious lines telling ya I’m doing fine Solitary hymn written by a solitary mind Solitary mind thinking so deep; Life goes on everyday another trip Solitary mind Relations I rip; Friendship became so cheap The trouble in my life, is after I was going deep I realized the wolves behind the masks of sheep I think about tomorrow every night before I sleep Will I live or will I die or will I have eternal sleep I became an anti-social the people I vomit I was born with a habit, realist to no limit This is my tendency need no Sympathetic I don’t give a damn I am just an apathetic I got a heart and a brain; I know how to make em mingle If you got hurt sorry, I never said that I’m an angel Trying to be social for me is an inconsequential I got snitches from people; my state’s consequential Living in this jungle; we say no confidential This is my definition; and I prefer to be a single It’s a peaceful way to live my life high Just the way it is, the solitary mind Word up! Give someone a raw deal = to treat someone unfairly or badly. Simple Simon = a name used to refer to a foolish man or boy. Originally it was the name of a foolish boy in a nursery rhyme. Wishy-washy = not having clear or firm ideas or beliefs. Pushy = trying hard to get what you want, especially in a way that seems rude Push me = don’t make angry, or don’t annoy me. IZM = concerning ideas and beliefs for example: realism, racism…etc. Previous Original and frank Next Ain’t playin
آخر تعديل Karim-Rap-4-Life 2014-08-19 في 11:59.
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2014-06-10, 21:49 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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you're the man in the mirror!!! Just like always a shiny star in the dark bu' wait a second!! there's no life on this planet 15 seen and no comments!!! Believe me Karim It's hard to know what are thinking about and it's so hard to believe that these words came out of ya mind But trust me you're on top like always and u deserve the best and all the best bro so keep it up !!! and don't forget chasing your dreams (Don't forget that you were the one who said that )
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2014-06-11, 11:05 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | |||
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Ahla
Amine How are you doing man; you mean I explained your thoughts like this! well I wrote this since a long time but I've noticed that the forum was asleep till now it is but with topics like yours and Intisar it will be awake again the problem we have here is that members read and go but don't reply that's the reason behind the laziness here emmm! about dreams I don't have any dreams they all gone with the wind once boom ayo amine thank ya for passing brother it's kind of you to put a reply yesterday it was 15 views = 0 reply today is 22 views = 1 reply actually I expected that I told you the forum is really deserted I feel pety for it :/ but still another one will put a comment and else I really don't know if i'll have some comment but whatever it is I accept it good luck Amine |
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2014-06-11, 11:57 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | |||
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thank u Karim no matter what happened u know that you are bigger than that ok and this forum was not like what I imagined b4 Coz I thought that I'll find comment; relpies that motivates me but unfortunantly there's nothing good here exept some members who makes this place alive (Like U Karim - Intissar- and don't forget me ) |
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2014-06-12, 11:45 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | |||
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Yeah I told you it's deserted since one year and half maybe coz the main moderator is absent or members are passing their holidays on the beach |
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2014-06-13, 10:51 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | |||
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i'm speechless ! it's beyond amazing ! |
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2014-06-13, 18:33 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | ||||
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Salam My sister thanks for passing by
well it's not that impossible to have an enormous Vocabulary it comes with practice and reading Remember that everyone was once with 10 words only... |
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2014-06-14, 17:44 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | |||
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sorry brother i am late i guess |
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2014-06-14, 20:09 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | ||||
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اقتباس:
Hello Talented Intisar nice to see you around here
you're late but it's not a problem take your time and enjoy |
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2014-06-15, 20:34 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |||
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It's so realistic just as you usual and like you said you're really realist to no limit, i know you have your reasons and i do believe in every single word written above ,
solitary mind opens for you the whole world ,it deepens your thoughts and let you realize how to deal with ppl and to give every one what he deserves .Also being away from people let you avoid too many troubles we all got too many wounds from being surrounded by wrong persons and we often heal them with new stitches i mean by being alone but at least we will no longer suffer from cannibals as you 've mentioned i like it as a whole but these lines were so damn great I don’t need an irritation; I don’t wanna be in a vortex" I’m not good for tests no guarantee for consequence " being so social will deeply involves you in more than one vertex what i really like about the things you write is that your writings are such a pure mirror that reflects your thoughts and don't give a damn about the few replies look at me you're the only one who replies on my topics and i appreciate even though i'll never stop because it's my way to say" i exist" thank you bro i learnt too many new words waiting for "ain't playin "don't be late . |
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2014-06-16, 23:01 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | ||||
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Yeah It's the best way to be known and no body tries to play with you. thank you for the fact of believing what I say
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2014-06-16, 23:04 | رقم المشاركة : 12 | ||||
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Yeah it seems good when you're young but when you get older it'll be the worst plan you did in your life but for me I don't have too coz when it come it's too late coz i'll be already gone I have that idea that I won't last so long I'll be gone and
The good die is young the bad one is old |
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2014-06-16, 23:19 | رقم المشاركة : 13 | ||||||
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I was surounded by a lot of them and after what they did I realized that I need to do something and solitary was the key... I wish it could be another solution but unfortunately there was not!
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yeah it came without thinking deeply اقتباس:
but it's okay I got two of the best writers in the section now Intisar and Amine and that's " elbaraka " and for the Ain't playing it's done since 6 months or more but I just feel lazy to post it but I'll inshallah just hold onn thanks million times for your annalysis I hope you really learned some words and I forgot to put the definition of Yellow belly = Coward gooooood luck sister * |
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2014-06-17, 17:02 | رقم المشاركة : 14 | ||||||
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yeah of course i did so that i'm happy ,in fact i forgot to ask about it i searched or it but no results so thank you really |
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2014-06-17, 18:57 | رقم المشاركة : 15 | |||
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Hey brother .. remember me !!! hhhhh its been nice reading your writings again bro , missed it!!
i read your poem for like 3 times & im havin flashbacks to everything happened be4 and many things were said before but i totally agree its better to be alone cause these days even your closest people to our heart can't take us when we'r in a bad times I just got enough, I don’t need no friends They just gonna leave ya When ya being frank this caught my eyes !! which friends u r talkin about ! i mean from the forum or real life i want to ask u about black poison, is she replying on ur emails or anything cause i can't seem to reach her peace |
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