My bad past

[nessrine kadi]

EVERY EVERY TIME WHEN I REPLAY THE WAY
I CRY I CRY WHAT I AM GOING TO SAY
TO THE GOD IN THE FINAL DAY
HOW I DID IT HOW MAY I CHANGE MY LIFE MAY

I NEED A WIDE MIND TO FORGET ALL THE PAST
TA LIVE THE FUTURE TO LIVE THE PERFECT LIFE
TO BE ALLWAYS HAPPY AND TO KEEP MY SMILE
THAT IS WHAT I NEED TO BE THE BEST WIFE

OH GOD FORGIVE ME WHAT I DID IN THE PAST
I SUGGEST ALL THE GIRLS OF THIS WORLD AND THIS PLANET
DONT DO LIKE TO ME AND BE HONEST WITH YOUR SPIRIT
CAUSE YOU WILL BE INHAPPY IF YOU TRY TO DO IT




I am not very good in poems so i ask you t correct my poem if you want

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة nessrine kadi

EVERY EVERY TIME WHEN I REPLAY THE WAY
I CRY I CRY WHAT I AM GOING TO SAY
TO THE GOD IN THE FINAL DAY
HOW I DID IT HOW MAY I CHANGE MY LIFE MAY

I NEED A WIDE MIND TO FORGET ALL THE PAST
TA LIVE THE FUTURE TO LIVE THE PERFECT LIFE
TO BE ALLWAYS HAPPY AND TO KEEP MY SMILE
THAT IS WHAT I NEED TO BE THE BEST WIFE

OH GOD FORGIVE ME WHAT I DID IN THE PAST
I SUGGEST ALL THE GIRLS OF THIS WORLD AND THIS PLANET
DONT DO LIKE TO ME AND BE HONEST WITH YOUR SPIRIT
CAUSE YOU WILL BE INHAPPY IF YOU TRY TO DO IT




I am not very good in poems so i ask you t correct my poem if you want

best greetings dear sis
^^
how are you doing
?
wish ya fine
^^
well
the poem is beautiful
for real
because it's honest
and that made me look away from any kind of mistakes
and just focus on the beautiful meanings the poem possesses
great work sis
wish to see more from you here
your bro
jimmy
^^