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The last letter of the poet...lady of my heart
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2012-07-01, 18:32 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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The last letter of the poet...lady of my heart
O lady of my heart, where you used to dwell Should I keep suffering or should I tell Things that gone and things that still trigger Red fires, in me, how do I get weaker Still wondering, even I know what love did To poets, that darkness, through bad times indeed Just why life could never do so For me, to reveal secrets and to make me know That nothing lasts forever, no people stay together That thoughts of sunny days, so bad That thoughts of dark nights, so sad Tears on the cheeks , a very long stream That life is never as good as it may seem So hard to forget, so hard to let go Someone who gave you so much to remember, so much to know O lady, if you set me free you are wise But freedom in prison, is death in disguise What wisdom is that, when one word you say Ending all that in a wink, and sending it away What made your heart like rocks, so hard Goodbye, goodbye, that word, is so hard My poor heart, what pain you may bear For life’s not just, for life’s unfair ................. "a poet doesn't need always a motive to write while moments of joy, depression, or maybe just imagination might inspire his soul so that he sets his pen free and unleaches the words in everywhere to reach hungry hearts that seek for a she.lter and look for a cradle of hope even thru simple words" spy4me
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2012-07-01, 22:35 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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poetry at the top of magnificence
you are always provide amzing spy peace |
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2012-07-01, 23:41 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | |||
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2012-08-04, 19:31 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | |||
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hello my friend |
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2012-08-04, 22:43 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | ||||
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اقتباس:
hi princess, happy you showed up again and happy you like the poem too thank you for reading ^^ |
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2012-08-04, 23:44 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | |||
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oh lady of his heart what u ve done to him |
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2012-08-05, 00:05 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | |||
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2012-08-09, 15:22 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | |||
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Nice one
very expressive thu it's difficult to find the exact and suitable words to express our feelings sometimes but i think you succeeded nd u were very selective"poet"l I liked the way you 've chosen to describe "contradiction such as when you said:l O lady, if you set me free you are wise But freedom in prison, is death in disguise I liked the Story thu as I c it was sad somehow it told us about how love is sometimes unfair & tasteless nd how the dream falls apart as soon as the lovers can't share the same feelings congratulation,really it's wonderful Thank u friend for sharing Keep in touch |
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2012-08-09, 18:28 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | ||||
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اقتباس:
such poems may express the poet himself or a story that inspires him thank you again for reading ^^ |
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2012-08-10, 22:34 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |||
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never mind..any time |
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2012-08-12, 23:28 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | |||
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heart, letter, poet...lady |
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