I'm addicted to djelfa forum

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

As I got used to keep my eyes on my lap top instead of books searching for topics I’m interested in I forget everything outside just the world inside the net see watch and travel through my small screen around the world I won’t lie if you ask me what places you visited I will tell you gardens and white beaches of California, Tall Manhattan, Fifth Avenue, central park, Thomas Madison Gardens, Bronx, Los Angeles, Beverly hills, sillion valley and of course the Oxbridge…….and so many other places the fact that made addicted to the net and see what I saw all in my dreams I imagine a whole scenarios of films my own films.
Djelfa forum is one of my favourite places I always consider it my second home. There I can find a new friends and old friends of course reading their topics is better than reading George Orwell, Mark Twain’s “The adventures of Huckleberry Finn” or “Tom Sawyer”, Francis Scott Fitzgerald “Great Gatsby”, Sue Grafton “K is for killer” and her other alphabetical novels….etc I like djelfa’s members writings because they’re being real and suitable for our society. This forum is just like a drug to me because I can’t pass a day without taking a look at it and If I could not do that you find me talking to myself and keeping an imagination and daydreaming and all strange behaviours.

Talking to myself and the two karims are present of course, they always keep talking about the situation in djelfa forum:
K.B: Ayo man wassup how are ya doin’, how is it goin’ in djelfa forum?
KG: yeah baby so nice so good I am happy.
KB: koko you’re disgusting. kiki still mad atcha.
KG: nap nap she’s still mad atcha. you did it not me.
KB: me!!!!
KG: your shadow , of course you remember the Rap attacks show.
KB: oh man I got it wow It was a very damny show I used to diss “X chow” then
The freestyle was full of craziness and madness that’s what Rappers do.
KG: that cute “May may” Barçelon fan until the end of time.
KB: yeah yeah you know sometimes I act like a crazy always talking ridiculousness,
I got nervous when she told me I can’t express my self you know.
KG: yeah whatever it’s her opinion she’s free and you asked them to say their points
Of view normally you should have expect everything.
KB: yeah yeah, and Miss cool was a soldier like me, my right arm.
KG: she’s cute and you made her a soldier don’t you feel ashamed let that nice girl
Calm please.
KB: unfortunately Black poison was not there it would be a war between members,
And administrators got mad at us and they ban us all from that sweet home,
KG: oh thanks god you understand you always search for trouble.
KB: suppose everybody got angry and make a great manifestation then administrators,
Close the forum and everybody go home to sleep.
KG: it would be a catastrophe.
KB: a catastrophe like what?
KG: a chaos as an example.
KB: oh damn? Yeah djelfa members would get out to the street for the vengeance want
To get Mr. Rap-4-Life and X-Chow to punish them and murder them.
KG: hey man what kind of imagination you think of lets keep it real.
KB: and and and you see our profile pictures in the Dz News, El Nahar, MTV Base,
Euro-news, BBC, CNN and Newspapers make a lot of articles about our lives as
Dz youths then ask everybody outside about us.

KG: oh man are you alright!!! I think temperature is high in your body.
KB: FBI, CIA will have an investigations on our files then they will find our
Addresses and they would start with X-chow they knock his door and he was still
Asleep they catch him make him get outside without shoes and he keep yelling at
Them I’ll kill that boy I swear I’ll kill that fake rapper.
KG: oh man I think you did not sleep for 5 days.
KB: and you know karim see the news and discover that X-chow is in jail and he got
Mad he talked to Scholfield the main actor of “Prison break” to give him the map
Of the prison to make a tattoo in his back just like Pidro and Jem3i to escape with
X-Chow then meet Eminem and some Niggaz in the hoods of Detroit than learn
Something about Rap.
KG: God please save this mad Rapper.
KB: when I found Scholfield I’ll take the map of the prison and go directly to
Surrender my self and got into that jail and meet X-Chow I find him angry and
We get a fight until some prisoners intervene to hit us both then we got nervous
And revenge from them all coz DZ people are just like NIGGAZ and then got
Free finally escaping to a jungle in Florida we’ll meet some Indians there and
Live with them some days and learn how to **** snakes and dance like them.
KG: and then…..Mr Psycho
KB: when we back home people come to visit us and support us with money to buy
A Studio then I’ll give it to X-Chow coz I don’t need it. People will see us in every Channel “Arabs Got Talent” will invite us and when I go I’ll rap there but “Ali”
Don’t like my Rap and “Najwa” too and me when I get nervous I rap against
Them telling them to go to hell and supporters there will like me and order them
To give me the reward and I won’t accept just it and give my reward to that little Who was singing Jazz or Blue music she was third at list…..then I’ll be famous
KG: Get up get up son we need some potatoes and milk…..
KB: Potatoes ……and why I am shaking ?
KG: Get Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp! Lazy it’s time.

Mother was ordering me to get up and she shook me that’s why I felt shaking in my dream.

[miss.cool]

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
omg karim u r so talented
at the begining it was somethin then another story came out
brilliant
loved it

yeah i was ur right arm hhhh im cute n cool i guess thnx good karim for sayin im cute hhh

loved it
but u x chow need that docotr there sara
it me im ready to play the role hhhh



nice amazin 'cute' one n soooooooooooooo freakin funny

keep it up

[miss.cool]

but we said no regrets
what happened ?? >>>>>> u got me right?? n_________________n

[Black_Poison]

hhhhhhhhhhhhhh
good one man hhhhhhhh
brilliant awsome and tallented
this story is funny and cute but still having that noble message of peace and forgivness coming from a good brother's heart
and you'll be rewarded for that cuz you are the one who started with peace

both KG an KB are fabulous
you don't have a bad side
i think that KB is misunderstood that's why he's angry hhhhh
at least he wanted me to be there unlike KG that thought i was a trouble
but may be he's right hhhhh cuz i always mess things up hhhh


Miss cool hhhh it's true she is a cute girl but when it comes to the real deal she's better than 10 soldiers hhhh
she is so reliable and loyale friend and i would trust her on my life

what a wild imagination
Prison break was better then the real one hhhhhhh

i really want to taste snakes made by indians hhhhh

Arab's got tallent the fake show
it's a total disaster of unfairness hhhh
you told them the truth about going to hell hhhh
an amaizing dream washed away by potatoes and milk

[Black_Poison]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة miss.cool

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
omg karim u r so talented
at the begining it was somethin then another story came out
brilliant
loved it

yeah i was ur right arm hhhh im cute n cool i guess thnx good karim for sayin im cute hhh

loved it
but u x chow need that docotr there sara
it me im ready to play the role hhhh



nice amazin 'cute' one n soooooooooooooo freakin funny

keep it up

hhhhhhhhhh
are you sure you wanna be Sara hhhhh
i wanna fight some prisoners and kill some cops hhhh
and taste snakes made by indians hhhhh
seems delicious
i want the receipe hhhhhh
what do you think
??????????are you comming with me

[miss.cool]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison

hhhhhhhhhh
are you sure you wanna be Sara hhhhh
i wanna fight some prisoners and kill some cops hhhh
and taste snakes made by indians hhhhh
seems delicious
i want the receipe hhhhhh
what do you think
??????????are you comming with me

hhh so u r t_bag u know him?
he's the devil himself hhhhhh

i will go with u of course
just tell me when hhhhhhhh

[Black_Poison]

T-Bag at once
oh girl tell me what did i do to you hhhhhhh
to compare me with him hhhhhh
any way start packing your stuff cuz we are going with tha dawn hhhhh
don't forget the money hhhhh

[miss.cool]

hhh yeah he's soooo evil n he loves revenge
u r like him just in that revenge thing hhhh

yeah we will steal a bank on our way dont worry
hhhh

(we're chatting in that topic dont u think they'll close karim's topic)
hhh

[Black_Poison]

hhhhhhhh may be it's true hhhh
in that revenge point hhhhh
ok let's do it

sorry karim hhhhh
we are getting you in troubles hhhhhh

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة miss.cool

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
omg karim u r so talented
at the begining it was somethin then another story came out
brilliant
loved it

yeah i was ur right arm hhhh im cute n cool i guess thnx good karim for sayin im cute hhh

loved it
but u x chow need that docotr there sara
it me im ready to play the role hhhh



nice amazin 'cute' one n soooooooooooooo freakin funny

keep it up

Hey nice to see you here, Normally I should have mentioned you in the scenario. Yeah as you see another invisible talent I guess I will try to work on it to develop it, it needs a deep imagination to create some scenes and fortunately I’ve that ability I mean to create scenes and events you can read my topic (the beginning of my short story) I’m working on it read it tell me If I can continue or make a full stop.
I was confused about your reaction If I mentioned your name in the “prison break” as Sara and you know how the situation of Sara in series was, I decided to move that scene ha ha but next time I’ll integrate you and Black Poison maybe in an adventures oh wait wait maybe in a strange Arabs Got Talent show hi hi hi I don’t I’ll try this idea hi hi hi.
“I understand your attitude about “regret” we need to rush to peace if they accept it would be a pleasure if they did not it would be normal but keep quiet and everything is ok”

I enjoyed life of Indians we met “Pocahontas” X chow sung her a pop song their Tribe wanted to **** us they thought we tended to kidnap her then X-chow was intelligent he sung them a pop songs he seems cute coz me I looked like angry coz I made a rap on ‘em.
As you know “Pocahontas” changed her name to “Rebecca” in reality but I told her to change her name to “Fatiha” she gave us (zouz 7alazonat) as a gift.

Thank you and « Sa7a Ramdankom »

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison

hhhhhhhhhhhhhh
good one man hhhhhhhh
brilliant awsome and tallented
this story is funny and cute but still having that noble message of peace and forgivness coming from a good brother's heart
and you'll be rewarded for that cuz you are the one who started with peace

both KG an KB are fabulous
you don't have a bad side
i think that KB is misunderstood that's why he's angry hhhhh
at least he wanted me to be there unlike KG that thought i was a trouble
but may be he's right hhhhh cuz i always mess things up hhhh


Miss cool hhhh it's true she is a cute girl but when it comes to the real deal she's better than 10 soldiers hhhh
she is so reliable and loyale friend and i would trust her on my life

what a wild imagination
Prison break was better then the real one hhhhhhh

i really want to taste snakes made by indians hhhhh

Arab's got tallent the fake show
it's a total disaster of unfairness hhhh
you told them the truth about going to hell hhhh
an amaizing dream washed away by potatoes and milk

greetings and respect to your mother for raising such a great person

Hey nice to see you here too Black Poison, yeah you’re alright about the peace message it’s the main theme of this story if I can name it story. I just wanted to say That I’m addicted to “Djelfa forum” the fact that make me see dreams sometimes I dream that I am writing comments on English Section.
Here KB is fabulous he’s just like a movie maker he always come up with strange ideas. Both KB and KG appreciate your presence, KB was less encouraged because of your absence and KG don’t wish getting someone else in fight.
“Stop Talking you never mess things up”
Yeah Sara is better than 10 soldiers and you too, so I guess we are going to make a Military Base but how we call it, think about it. “Panic Zone”

“Snakes are bought there 2 $ for each metre not Kg”

I enjoyed life of Indians we met “Pocahontas” X chow sung her a pop song their Tribe wanted to **** us they thought we tended to kidnap her then X-chow was intelligent he sung them a pop songs he seems cute coz me I looked like angry coz I made a rap on ‘em.
As you know “Pocahontas” changed her name to “Rebecca” in reality but I told her to change her name to “Fatiha” she gave us (zouz 7alazonat) as a gift.

You know potatoes is an amazing fruit in the world even American can’t get it, but In Algeria you get any kind of “Batata” in Algeria it’s very cheap yes, every body need batata.
Salty Batata, Sweet Batata, Yellow Batata, Brown Batata, Small & Big Batatas
it’s very useful even in “Engagement for marriage” we take it as a present. I see that Batata will be everything. “khalida” proposed films about the childhood of “batata” in Algeria and how she got married than have got “lil batatets” you know she’s a great cultivated minister in the world and she never forget musical concerts so many singers to sing about “Batata”
If “Francis Ford Copoler” knew about “Batata” he would make a film about it instead of “Indiana Jones” and “Godfather” he would think about a film called “Batata-Gather”

…………………These are few lines about the queen Batata…………..

Batata we need you miss Batata
We Really miss you on the (Tabla)
We heard you change your family
Fruits don’t like you believe me
Vegetables is your only family
Thank you and « Sa7a Ramdankom »

[Black_Poison]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life

Hey nice to see you here too Black Poison, yeah you’re alright about the peace message it’s the main theme of this story if I can name it story. I just wanted to say That I’m addicted to “Djelfa forum” the fact that make me see dreams sometimes I dream that I am writing comments on English Section.
Here KB is fabulous he’s just like a movie maker he always come up with strange ideas. Both KB and KG appreciate your presence, KB was less encouraged because of your absence and KG don’t wish getting someone else in fight.
“Stop Talking you never mess things up”
Yeah Sara is better than 10 soldiers and you too, so I guess we are going to make a Military Base but how we call it, think about it. “Panic Zone”

“Snakes are bought there 2 $ for each metre not Kg”

I enjoyed life of Indians we met “Pocahontas” X chow sung her a pop song their Tribe wanted to **** us they thought we tended to kidnap her then X-chow was intelligent he sung them a pop songs he seems cute coz me I looked like angry coz I made a rap on ‘em.
As you know “Pocahontas” changed her name to “Rebecca” in reality but I told her to change her name to “Fatiha” she gave us (zouz 7alazonat) as a gift.

You know potatoes is an amazing fruit in the world even American can’t get it, but In Algeria you get any kind of “Batata” in Algeria it’s very cheap yes, every body need batata.
Salty Batata, Sweet Batata, Yellow Batata, Brown Batata, Small & Big Batatas
it’s very useful even in “Engagement for marriage” we take it as a present. I see that Batata will be everything. “khalida” proposed films about the childhood of “batata” in Algeria and how she got married than have got “lil batatets” you know she’s a great cultivated minister in the world and she never forget musical concerts so many singers to sing about “Batata”
If “Francis Ford Copoler” knew about “Batata” he would make a film about it instead of “Indiana Jones” and “Godfather” he would think about a film called “Batata-Gather”

…………………These are few lines about the queen Batata…………..

Batata we need you miss Batata
We Really miss you on the (Tabla)
We heard you change your family
Fruits don’t like you believe me
Vegetables is your only family
Thank you and « Sa7a Ramdankom »

hhhhhhh it's a sweet addiction that i don't want to be cured of hhhhh
yeah it's weird how we dream about this forum and about people we've never seen
hhhhh it reminds me when i sink in day dreaming about the forum and start smiling to my self
till mom wakes me up saying : ya lbahloula win raho 3a9lak hhhhh

Panic Zone mmmmmm seems great yeah it's gonna be the coolest army hhhh

beleive it or not i was going to suggest that idea of X chow singing pop to Pocahontas hhhhhh
then i thought naaah don't mess up the story hhhhhh
but i've never thought about Fatiha hhhhhh it's LOL
snakes are as expensive as potatoes hhhhhhh

by the way what did you do with the Halazoun hhhhhyh
Batata is a great politician cuz it knows how to make people busy
and not asking about public money that is spent in ups and downs of khalida and her gang

and nouam el barlaman who don't know anything but lifting their hands agreeing on every thing as long as they are payed


our beloved goverment taught us how to respect the power of Batata
and how to understand it
Rabi yjib el kheir

great song by the way i hope it can touch Battata's heart to be a vegetable again
hhhhhhhh
peace

[Black_Poison]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life

Hey nice to see you here, Normally I should have mentioned you in the scenario. Yeah as you see another invisible talent I guess I will try to work on it to develop it, it needs a deep imagination to create some scenes and fortunately I’ve that ability I mean to create scenes and events you can read my topic (the beginning of my short story) I’m working on it read it tell me If I can continue or make a full stop.
I was confused about your reaction If I mentioned your name in the “prison break” as Sara and you know how the situation of Sara in series was, I decided to move that scene ha ha but next time I’ll integrate you and Black Poison maybe in an adventures oh wait wait maybe in a strange Arabs Got Talent show hi hi hi I don’t I’ll try this idea hi hi hi.
“I understand your attitude about “regret” we need to rush to peace if they accept it would be a pleasure if they did not it would be normal but keep quiet and everything is ok”

I enjoyed life of Indians we met “Pocahontas” X chow sung her a pop song their Tribe wanted to **** us they thought we tended to kidnap her then X-chow was intelligent he sung them a pop songs he seems cute coz me I looked like angry coz I made a rap on ‘em.
As you know “Pocahontas” changed her name to “Rebecca” in reality but I told her to change her name to “Fatiha” she gave us (zouz 7alazonat) as a gift.

Thank you and « Sa7a Ramdankom »

yeaaaaah i really want to see my self as a carachter in a story or adventure hhhh
i can't wait for it
after all you are a movie maker hhhhhhhhh

[amel nina]

wow another super piece of writing from the talented boy


I liked how the ideas have been connected, you started by talking about djelfa forum and you ended up by "arabs got talent" show

it's really amazing this wierd, unusuall combination that you got here, how did you manage to organize it that way?? it seems to me very hard, but like usuall you did it on your own perfecytly



congratulations brother




keep it up and never give up

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Thank you Thank you thousand time Amel Nina I really like your sweet comments thank you and hope you like the next topics. Sa7a Ramdanek