You're a lier

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This's my second poem ... I hope you a good time with these modest words

We’ve no thing to talk about
?You lied to me …but how

I believed your sensible words
I really hate you now

Between us there’s a daughter
That makes me inevitably suffer

?She will ask where’s my father
I’m sure you’ve no answer

I’ll fight in the desert
But I need amount of water

I hate you too much
You hear me and watch

You like what’s happening with me
Ahh… I’ll throw myself in the sea

You’re more than lier
You deserve a hot fire

Bye my lovely daughter
Bye…bye forever

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?Where are the comments

[azhar15]

We’ve no thing to talk about
?You lied to me …but how
i realy like ur poem
good words

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة azhar15

We’ve no thing to talk about
?You lied to me …but how
i realy like ur poem
good words

Thank you .... I'm in seventh heaven

[sarouna22]

We’ve no thing to talk about
?You lied to me …but how

I believed your sensible words
I really hate you now

nice words

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sarouna22

We’ve no thing to talk about
?You lied to me …but how

I believed your sensible words
I really hate you now

nice words

Thank you a lot

[medjedel67]

ur words really touched me
thx

[that's me]

big words ! carry on
u have the spirit of a poet

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة that's me

big words ! carry on
u have the spirit of a poet

hhhhhhhhhh I didn't know that thank you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة medjedel67

ur words really touched me
thx

This's my principal aim

You're welcome

[ميناء السلام]

رائعععععععععععععععععععععععععععععع واصل

[نعمة القدوس]

Hi friend


I really like this poem

cuZz you'll gettin better by the time

It's better than the old one


Cary on


وععععع

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة نعمة القدوس

Hi friend


I really like this poem

cuZz you'll gettin better by the time

It's better than the old one


Cary on


وععععع

بعووووووووووووووووووووووووووووو

I've waited this comment for long time

Thank you

[نعمة القدوس]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة خلق الاسلام الحياء

Just to not say that I don't keep my word


الترجمة :

برك باه ماتقولش نعمة ماعندهاش كلمة

[saya2011]

wow it's very good poem
I hope to continue like that
thank you