Tears

[that's me]

great pem carry n

[biohay2006]

It looks like a bad injury u had ...i hope u recover from it very soon
really touching poem of yours
keep going
waiting for new one... but this time not about a broken heart but about a happy soul

[starling]

peace be upon you


My friend tears are expressions show inside feeling ...some persons cry because they are deeply hurt so we hope that tears are agood way in recovery

[nounouss]

is it really ur poem
i've doubts abt it.
but nice nd touching words

[rock-girl46]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة سياف 100

[Ii dont know you but i lovde you from my heart throught your poemI]

thanksssssssssss

[lovely friend]

may allah bless you sis for your beautiful and honest feelings that you have...thank you for your great topic

[حكاية قلب]

i adoooooooooooore it
lùùùùv it

ur so good
keep going

peace

^^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Hey..........I am ipressed by your topic and I'm going to write about a topic of mine just like yours okey just wait for it hhh

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

My words is that this is a great simple poem

I am really impressed by the way you chose words

and expressions I liked the rhymes too because they are

Parralaled I can see that .....The meaning is clear your

message is done and comprehended I'm personally

Feel sad for you because of the same matter of separation

Deceiving is the most word I really hate....I agree withyou

in your poem.

the part that I am admired by is

When you held me you said "forever"

Now that your gone I know you meant "never"

and this part too

As I sit here thinking about you

My face is wet with tears past due

now here I think you might take a look again

I know they say love is blind.........A

But I had only you on my mind.....B

I think A and B has the same meaning so no need to put "But"

and I propose toput "and" instead....it still an opinion ask Miss

"Shin Shyn"to give us a view about it.

[حكاية قلب]

Yes i do agree with u Karim

----------------

Cause if you mean u Love this person
you'll say

I know they say love is blind.........A

and I had only you on my mind.....B


and if you dont let it But
but i think u do

[rock-girl46]

thanks so much about ur corrections and i'll take ur advices in the near future nchallah
thanks

[حكاية قلب]

thanks so much about ur corrections and i'll take ur advices in the near future nchallah
thanks

Never Mind Miss

^.^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rock-girl46

thanks so much about ur corrections and i'll take ur advices in the near future nchallah
thanks

If you I'm mentioned too....You're welcome toooo

[rock-girl46]

thanks both of u

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

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