LOVE message to unknown --> poem

Asolvip · 2013-07-08, 16:25

Sitting alone in a black world
Waiting for someone to come and give me a hold
I want to feel the warmth , I feel so cold
I miss you , I dare and *say it in bold
My soul has been already sold
To you, when I heard the first word you'd told
Your were so charming when you said it
And I was begging you to repeat it
But you always wanted to keep it
You were the perfect one for me
You tried to come over everything to be with me
I can't forget those hard times we spent together*
And our promise to keep together till forever
I thought I was yours and you were mine*
Till that day when you told me: we don't have to cross the red line
You are my best friend , I can't make you mine*
I can't forget that picture of us sitting under that vine
Counting grapes ... From one to nine .
I remember and I cry*
I just keep asking why ?!
I'm not drunk but I can feel the hangover*
I can't believe that our sweet memories are over
My heart is aching badly
And my tears have been dried completely
So, what I have to do ? Thank you?!
No , I must get over you

I don't believe in love but I think that what people feel hehe.
I hope you like it

Karim-Rap-4-Life · 2013-07-09, 20:21

Nice one thanks

Asolvip · 2013-07-09, 21:51

Welcome ... This one is over 25 lines hhhh

the fly boy · 2013-07-10, 00:02

Thank you sister
well I wanna say love is something nature
love was born with us n we all belive in love
n there's a huge difference between love n relationships
coz ppl now mix things n relationships r crimes commited againsr love
Love is pure as we used it in what pleases Allah
and wht Allah gives u no one gonna stop it
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love tht falls in one heart n not in the other heart isn't love
this is wht we call admiring
PEACE
^_^
and blessed Ramadan 4 u
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Karim-Rap-4-Life · 2013-07-10, 00:35

Iiiiiiih Life teaches us so many things
I remember once I wrote a love poem I was wrong but a person commented back and made a big topic made me look like a sinner and pfffffffff and now look how he's pretty good talker it hurts it hurts i'm not reinventing trouble but I like to see the paradox on that people to make sure that no body is perfect