My sky /my new poem

[cute_angel]

Peace be upon you

How are you guys

these days I was a bit upset

so I tried to write those words

I hope you will like it

And I'm waiting for your criticism ok

My sky

Once a fortune_teller in the sky

Told me about the secret of a butterfly


In a cradle of life where I found a goblin

Of a fairy tale that showed me the way to spring


Where the flowers twinkeled like stars

And theire dew like a crown of pearls


I walked like an elf between the heigh trees

And the serene and pure seabreeze



Then I saw a castle of white snow

On a mountain surrounded by a rainbow


I climbed it to reach the palace

To see the magic and charm of the place


But a wind blow full of sorrow

And made me like a thin leaves of a willow



So my tears rush from my eyes

And my ears didn't hear an voice


I found my self in a whriles full of woes


In the darkness of sadness and solitude

I dindn't find anyone just my God

Who gave me a candle of faith to be my guide

[cute_angel]

No one liked it???????

[gold_dream]

thank you so much angel!it is nice poem I discovered many new words here

[setifienne]

peace be upon u dear cute angel
,of course we did like it !!! it's beautiful ,and each syllable is pregnant with nuances of profoundly important meaning i really enjoyed reading it ,and i loved the two final lines the most ,thank u so much ,God bless you
Regrads

[cute_angel]

thank you so much both of you

really I'm happy to read your comments

God bless you

[smart]

thank you so much cute angel you enjoyed me by reading this wonderful poem i am waiting to hear another poem from yours

[cute_angel]

Thanks so much sister for the sweet reply

[imane-23]

very nice poem continue

[imane-23]

very nice
congratulation

[cute_angel]

thanks sister

[hairless17]

**** What a nice poem *****

[cute_angel]

thanks for the nice comments

[hairless17]

i suggest that we make a space for our own poems
what do you think

[cute_angel]

I't's a good idea but let's see the modirator

[smart]

hi i just wanted to ask from you some thing,can you borrow it for me i really liked it and i want to read it to my friends in the english sessons
iam waiting for your reply