Graveyard of Memories"

[نَازِكْ]

Peace pll
Sometimes we found ourselves bound to sacrifice all our memories even the happiest ones ;then we bury them in a deep place where noone can reach them ......the girl of the story ;she buried even herself there :')
enjoy;;^^


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When the silver moon centers the dark
When the earth wears the black
When the eyes enter in a tight sleep
;;;;when pain gets deep
Beyond midnight;with the first thread of twilight
A girl walks dragging along her fright
crossing her path through a graveyard
afraid of looking at her shaking dyed hand
staring at the name written on the grave
the name that she was supposed to save
getting back in the past
the years passed so past
she was always runing away
having no home where she could stay
swallowing slowly regret's drops that are bitter
hiding ; hiding between the graves as a wanted killer
she has believed in fake promises
then ;she shrouded in a grave her memories
her only direction was the graveyard
to look for the doll once she buried under the ground
she has never been afraid of all the ghosts surronded by
singing with them the farewell's song under the dark sky
the tune is so sad ,but she won't cry
till now ,she is still alive at the same graveyard
burying always a new memory she was hididng inside
playing dice with her unknown destiny
drowning in a world of nonentity.
hope you like it !!!

PS .rose you're always here between the lines , you're the tune

[Hind_dz]

Hey Intissar ^^

We haven't talked 4 quite a while.. I hope u r doing great with Bac n everything..

Well.. I honestly didn't know that u write n I was a bit surprised when I saw ur topic but I really liked the title n it's the one that drew my attention.. The poem is a bit dark but it's really good I like it.. so keep on writing sister ^^ u r good

Peace

[نَازِكْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hind_dz

Hey Intissar ^^

We haven't talked 4 quite a while.. I hope u r doing great with Bac n everything..

Well.. I honestly didn't know that u write n I was a bit surprised when I saw ur topic but I really liked the title n it's the one that drew my attention.. The poem is a bit dark but it's really good I like it.. so keep on writing sister ^^ u r good

Peace

Hellos hindo ;how are you doing girl it has been a while hope you're doing good with your new life for me offfffff i'm confused
anyway happy to see ya around again
sometimes we have to wear the black n to live among the dark though it's not our choice .........thanx sister for dropping by
peace

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

salam...another deepest meaningful one ^^
keep it up Intissar

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life

salam...another deepest meaningful one ^^
keep it up Intissar

salam brother
well thank ya i appreciate your passing by
hope i havn't done any mistake n waiting for new writings

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انتصار1995

salam brother
well thank ya i appreciate your passing by
hope i havn't done any mistake n waiting for new writings

No it's freemistaken
it's so precise
but
full of real hiden meanings that only who lived
the tragedy will understand it
it's a peace of art
trust me

keep it up

about new writings i'm working on one i don't know when to post it
peace up

[نَازِكْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life

No it's freemistaken
it's so precise
but
full of real hiden meanings that only who lived
the tragedy will understand it
it's a peace of art
trust me

keep it up

about new writings i'm working on one i don't know when to post it
peace up

that's good ; indeed that's how i wanted it so clear and so mysterious depend on the reader n yeah except of the ones who lived this situation no one else can see behind it
thank ya again your words pushed me to emprove
hope you'll post it soon

[fille algerie]

nice one
really I like it
Thank u so much sis 4 ur sharing
keep it up
C u soon
Best Regards

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة fille algerie

nice one
really I like it
Thank u so much sis 4 ur sharing
keep it up
C u soon
Best Regards

thanx for passing by sis n also for leaving such a sweet comment
^^

[نميرة 08]

Hello Intissar =)
How are u doing ? Insh'Allah great ~
Good Job Honey !
I love it ^^
Keep going sis ♥

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة نميرة 08

Hello Intissar =)
How are u doing ? Insh'Allah great ~
Good Job Honey !
I love it ^^
Keep going sis ♥

hellos sweet zahra i'm fine "what about u " ;n i'm so happy reading your sweet comment thank ya girl
i appreciate your encouragement and it's good you like it ;take care lil sis ^^

[Ramzicsc]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life

No it's freemistaken
it's so precise
but
full of real hiden meanings that only who lived
the tragedy will understand it
it's a peace of art
trust me

keep it up

about new writings i'm working on one i don't know when to post it
peace up

We say PIECE* of art :P
Anyways, I really like it... Not my type thought, but I'm kinda depressed today so yeah it was all I needed :P Keep going, people might not understand you, they might say what your doing is just bullcrap.. But trust me, real open minded people will appreciate your talent, I'm hoping to acheive something with my writting too! So yeah good work.

[نَازِكْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Ramzicsc

We say PIECE* of art :P
Anyways, I really like it... Not my type thought, but I'm kinda depressed today so yeah it was all I needed :P Keep going, people might not understand you, they might say what your doing is just bullcrap.. But trust me, real open minded people will appreciate your talent, I'm hoping to acheive something with my writting too! So yeah good work.

peace
brother karim didn't pay attention to the mistake
anyway
yes ;people think that it's merely nonsense but not me ;it helps me to feel free ;writing is my only remained friend so i'll hang on it till the last breath even if nobody would hear me ;i appreciate your comment it's so meaningful so thank ya

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Ramzicsc

We say PIECE* of art :P
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it's a mistake coz I always write peace instead of piece coz I use this word so much like
Peace up hhhhh