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2013-10-23, 17:25 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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Graveyard of Memories"
Peace pll PS .rose you're always here between the lines , you're the tune
Sometimes we found ourselves bound to sacrifice all our memories even the happiest ones ;then we bury them in a deep place where noone can reach them ......the girl of the story ;she buried even herself there :') enjoy;;^^ ; ; ; When the silver moon centers the dark When the earth wears the black When the eyes enter in a tight sleep ;;;;when pain gets deep Beyond midnight;with the first thread of twilight A girl walks dragging along her fright crossing her path through a graveyard afraid of looking at her shaking dyed hand staring at the name written on the grave the name that she was supposed to save getting back in the past the years passed so past she was always runing away having no home where she could stay swallowing slowly regret's drops that are bitter hiding ; hiding between the graves as a wanted killer she has believed in fake promises then ;she shrouded in a grave her memories her only direction was the graveyard to look for the doll once she buried under the ground she has never been afraid of all the ghosts surronded by singing with them the farewell's song under the dark sky the tune is so sad ,but she won't cry till now ,she is still alive at the same graveyard burying always a new memory she was hididng inside playing dice with her unknown destiny drowning in a world of nonentity. hope you like it !!!
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2013-10-24, 18:34 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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2013-10-24, 18:54 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | ||||
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اقتباس:
anyway happy to see ya around again sometimes we have to wear the black n to live among the dark though it's not our choice .........thanx sister for dropping by peace |
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2013-10-30, 16:35 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | |||
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salam...another deepest meaningful one ^^ |
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2013-10-31, 17:31 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | ||||
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اقتباس:
well thank ya i appreciate your passing by hope i havn't done any mistake n waiting for new writings |
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2013-11-01, 11:50 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | ||||
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اقتباس:
No it's freemistaken
it's so precise but full of real hiden meanings that only who lived the tragedy will understand it it's a peace of art trust me keep it up about new writings i'm working on one i don't know when to post it peace up |
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2013-11-01, 13:16 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | ||||
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اقتباس:
thank ya again your words pushed me to emprove hope you'll post it soon |
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2013-11-19, 12:42 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | |||
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nice one |
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2013-11-20, 16:57 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | ||||
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اقتباس:
^^ |
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2013-11-21, 16:07 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |||
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Hello Intissar =) |
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2013-11-21, 16:34 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | ||||
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اقتباس:
i appreciate your encouragement and it's good you like it ;take care lil sis ^^ |
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2013-12-02, 21:21 | رقم المشاركة : 12 | ||||
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اقتباس:
Anyways, I really like it... Not my type thought, but I'm kinda depressed today so yeah it was all I needed :P Keep going, people might not understand you, they might say what your doing is just bullcrap.. But trust me, real open minded people will appreciate your talent, I'm hoping to acheive something with my writting too! So yeah good work. |
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2013-12-03, 13:16 | رقم المشاركة : 13 | ||||
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اقتباس:
brother karim didn't pay attention to the mistake anyway yes ;people think that it's merely nonsense but not me ;it helps me to feel free ;writing is my only remained friend so i'll hang on it till the last breath even if nobody would hear me ;i appreciate your comment it's so meaningful so thank ya |
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2014-01-02, 13:13 | رقم المشاركة : 14 | |||
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it's a mistake coz I always write peace instead of piece coz I use this word so much like Peace up hhhhh |
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الكلمات الدلالية (Tags) |
graveyard, memories" |
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