I want to show you my poem

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where are the poems

[smart]

which poems?!!

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I mean other new poems

[أم بدر الدين]

DEAR SMART you are one of the best learners of English in a secondary school i have never seen before
thank you
keep going on
your poem is very nice

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you see smart it is not only my opinion

[smart]

thank you all so much
i will try to become better .....and better

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that is what we are expecting

[smart]

of course if you help me
i cant do it by my self

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I am always ready to help you
just ask

[smart]

i know that i can count on you

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and I am waiting for you requests

[smart]

imagine for one minute that you are alone in this world
no parents,no friends,nothing to be learnt
no workers,no schools
no buildings ,no rules
no listeners to the words you use
every thing would get confused
ial sure that you think life would be impossible
because man is always sociable
and his life in these conditions would be unbelievable
if it were possible,it would certainly be horrible
no one can live without at least one friend
otherwis all human relationships would arrive at their end
and our hapiness,there would be no way
even if we try every day
to speak to somethiung or an animal
and unfortunately,we would only recall
that one should difinitly accept
the true meaning of the proverb
friendship is like the relationship between the hand and the eyes
when the hand get hurt,the eyes cry
and when the eyes cry the hand wipes!!
i hope that you will like it

[hairless17]

really nice
continue smarty

[smart]

thanks.............you will see amayzing things

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of course we are waiting