Hard life

Asolvip · 2013-06-20, 13:56

I've lost myself
And I've lost my aim
I don't even remember what's my name ?
Today and yesterday are not the same
But who's the one you're going to blame?
Why have they changed? Are they looking for fame?
This is completely a shame
They were fool when they came*
Now they are burning like fire flame
They became serious and also curious
And this is so hilarious
They entered in people's business
And they stole all their happiness*
For me, they are such an illness*
They wanted to kill
But I won't lose my will
And I'll stand still
I won't feel that thrill
And I'll reach the dreams that once I wanted to fulfill*

Katy Pretty girl · 2013-06-20, 15:39

i realy luv what u write
u'r topics
u'r words
u'r rythme
so nice
keep it up

حميد.ص · 2013-06-20, 15:42

Thank you..............

Asolvip · 2013-06-20, 15:43

Thx my awesome friend ... I'll write more for you and you can check all my poems here .. I've published them

Katy Pretty girl · 2013-06-20, 16:18

yes
i saw u'r account in ......
and i luvd u'r page and u'r poems
good job

Karim-Rap-4-Life · 2013-06-20, 18:18

Another one so beautiful keep it up haaaaa you're so active mashaa allah

Asolvip · 2013-06-20, 18:21

I wish I could keep writing more & more but I want my poems to be special like masterpieces Hhhhh thank u bro .. Ur work also is nice

Karim-Rap-4-Life · 2013-06-20, 18:37

Okaaay I hope that of course

Asolvip · 2013-06-20, 18:46

Well didn't u check this poem about palestine
https://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?t=1331887
Just have a look

Karim-Rap-4-Life · 2013-06-20, 18:50

I was reading it coz I found it complicated lil bit I don't know i became less smart these days

Asolvip · 2013-06-20, 19:06

Hhhh .. U are smart ... So smart .. So don't worry .. You are always the best

Black_Poison · 2013-06-21, 03:59

WoooooooooooooW
yep ^^ Amazingly amazing hun
keep it up....you 'll never lose your way
if you can make it through the night there will be a better day
Just live life like living a dream
cuz you're the star among the team
Next time when you forget your name...i'll be here
To tell you you are the VIP Abir

Just keep it up and let the rhymes rain
and let release all that pain

Peace yo

Asolvip · 2013-06-21, 09:16

Wow cool ...
I know that every finished line is the beginning of new race
I forgot my name but I didn't forget the smile that u once drew on my face
I was always down but guys you raised me up
And you let me stand up
So I gotta a lot in my pocket and gotta show it up
You are the best friends ever , that's why I picked you up

Asolvip · 2013-06-21, 20:06

I still got more & and more
But they are hidden behind my secret door
I lost its key but I find it from time to time thrown on my golden floor
So don't be surprised if I am the best
I'll use my imagination and leave for you the rest
Don't be shocked .. Because my words will dig your chest hhhh

Black_Poison · 2013-06-23, 07:23

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Asolvip

Wow cool ...
I know that every finished line is the beginning of new race
I forgot my name but I didn't forget the smile that u once drew on my face
I was always down but guys you raised me up
And you let me stand up
So I gotta a lot in my pocket and gotta show it up
You are the best friends ever , that's why I picked you up

They say life goes on and on
Since i'm your sis i'll never let you alone
You're another rose in my garden
In the world of dreams of Black Poison
Where there is no chance for deceiving
Just beautiful rainbows...i'm beleiving
I made a wish on a shotting star
May Allah protect you where ever you are

^________^