for you .....

[maymay]

Oh im soooooo sorry dear Fedoua,I dont know wht happened to me...i was in the shower a while ago then i remembered that i made a huge mistake n that you r not rofaida....so i came to corrige it as soon as i could...hhihihi ghazel ...the curse of the era......rabi y7fadna mino...sorry again sweety...*

[Black_Poison]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maymay

Oh im soooooo sorry dear Fedoua,I dont know wht happened to me...i was in the shower a while ago then i remembered that i made a huge mistake n that you r not rofaida....so i came to corrige it as soon as i could...hhihihi ghazel ...the curse of the era......rabi y7fadna mino...sorry again sweety...*

It's okay
hhhhhhh
why don't you join us in dare or truth game
i'm playing it with hind now

[xchow]

sorry guys I 'm so sorry for that words but I promise I will give a good one next time
I write now
I use that words to show my angry like eminem do
thats all

[xchow]

this is for my lost love
When i look in your eye ....I see the big lie
Why ...Why !!??? you do that
this poor love must be cut !!!
I give you evrey thing .. my heart start to sing
but now don't cry to me
cause i hate you !!
demm the girls like you
go to hell .. don't sell ...("what")
your heart
you give me the pain
but I'm the sorrow in black night
I'm the evil with black might
with black sight
take your love away I can't stay
when you was my dear
I forget the fear
now take care I'm going
???I'll kill you ... hahah now you scare
!!! I'm fox in black box ... but you open it !!
!!! like a cave ... hahah!! I will eat you alive
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I write it ,it's old but okay

[maymay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة xchow

this is for my lost love
When i look in your eye ....I see the big lie
Why ...Why !!??? you do that
this poor love must be cut !!!
I give you evry thing .. my heart start to sing
but know don't cry to me
cauz i hate you !!
demm the girls like you
go to hell .. don't sell ...("what")
your heart
you give me the pain
but I'm the sorrow in black night
I'm the evil with black might
with black sight
take your love away I can't stay
when you was my dear
I forget the fear
now take care I'm going
???I will kill you ... hahah now you scare
!!! I'm fox in black box ... but you open it !!
!!! like a cave ... hahah!! I will eat you alive
___________________
I write it ,it's old but okay

MAAAAAAAAAAAAN that's really good!!!!there are parts there where i felt like i was listening to a professional song writer,just like Marshall's lyrics..especially this part" but I'm the sorrow in black night
I'm the evil with black might
with black sight"..you're on the right path bro,you just have to correct some grammatical mistakes and that's it....SALAM

[xchow]

thanks a lot sis your words make me work thank you again
and sorry for that word
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grammatical mistakes
I made it i write tooooo fast so you know

[xchow]

well it's good to hear your voice
I hope you're doing fine
and if you ever wonder
I'm lonley here tonight
I'm lost here in this moment
and time keeps slipping by
and If I could have just one wish
i'd have you by my side
I miss you
I need you
and i love you more than I did before
and if today , I don't see your face
nothing's changed no one could take your place
It gets harder everyday
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Miley cyrus