Life is a game

[المستعينة بالله]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة martha kasar

thank you my dear it's words from gold ii wish that you advance us best of the best

thank you for your interaction sister

I hop to you good life

good luck

[ziaya]

realy realy realy owsommmmmmmmmmm cooooooool siss

[freedoom]

This poem makes me cry

[المستعينة بالله]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ziaya

realy realy realy owsommmmmmmmmmm cooooooool siss

thank you sister

you make me strong

[المستعينة بالله]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة freedoom

This poem makes me cry

take it easy

this is the life and we can't change it

[mnh]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المستعينة بالله

no problem

I am agree with you sis

ah it's ok thanx a lot my dear

[ينابيع الصفاء]

love is a losing game

[amani b]

a really good words

and this is life

and life is nothing but a test we gotta be patient after all

thanks

[la manita]

nice production just carry on

[مراد تيقنطوشث]

hello i really like your poem and i ask allah to give you some courageous tomorrow and don't despair and never lose hope because allah is always by your side
remmember me for your mum
you know who am i ? i am your best friend the daugter of your uncle
كان الله في عونك

[المستعينة بالله]

thanks to all of you

next poem will be about the memories

wait me

goodbye

[المستعينة بالله]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مراد تيقنطوشث

hello i really like your poem and i ask allah to give you some courageous tomorrow and don't despair and never lose hope because allah is always by your side
remmember me for your mum
you know who am i ? i am your best friend the daugter of your uncle
كان الله في عونك

hi nihad how are you

don't worry I'm fine am waiting for results

and I'm so hopeful now

ah I think the song of maher zain affect you hhhhhhhh

I hope to you a good life

[Sadinne]

Hey there =D

So, first of all I really related to your poem, because sometimes I feel exactly the same way about life, like I'm alone and there's no one out there for me that can help me or that I can trust ^^

But, I'll admit that it was a little bit repetitive, as if you were repeating the same verse over over, like the idea wasn't evaluating or something, and you were usinf the same words over and over again...But over all it was okay ^^

You should keep writing, especially if it makes you feel better =D

[rola.29]

WAW !! it's wonderful, i really liked it
i wish you good luck .. happy to meet you
keep writting

[المستعينة بالله]

thank you sisters

good luck